This would have been so much better without the Harry loves Hermione crap. He turns down a literal goddess, SMFH. Would have been funny if Hermione had shot Harry down- "Haven't you been paying attention to how obsessed with Ron I am?"

I enjoyed the story. It kept a steady pace, no needless adjectives were detected. Well done. ;-)))

Nice story, even if harmony came out of nowhere but I'm not too bothered as its my otp.

Well that was good until you completely ruined it by pulling some Harmony bullshit.

Pl, pl pl, a sequel!

I liked the scenelet between Narcissa and Harry, and the new context for the question, "Is Draco alive?"

I did see this plot from your description, bravo!

Oh. Mah. Goodness'. Yes. Please. More. Sooooo much promise here if you made this more, and so satisfying as a one shot as well! Love it and thank you!

Love the story. I hope to see at least 1, if not 2 more chapters. Perhaps a second chapter involving Daphne and Harry telling Hermione what happened in the forest and the threr of them discousing plans for the future/a three-way relationship. The third chapter could be an epilogue with a bit of a rundown of what has happened the previous years between the end of chapter 2 and the start of chapter 3.

that was good very good
Draco122

Cool story. Awaiting more of this even though you’re probably done with it.

Nice

Shame that you used your character tags to disguise the fact that this is actually a Harry/Hermione fic instead of Harry/Daphne.

Nice work! Would love to read more.

So, what was even the point of this?

Just a 'Hermione is better than a literal Goddess' proof of concept?