Reviews for Love Bites
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20
Continue this please and for hilarities sake, have jaunes family be a descendant of vampire slayers/monster slayers but jaune doesnt know and it leads to some REALLY awkward moments
Farfikuger chapter 1 . 7/14
Continuing this would be most appreciated
XxSoulhatakeXx chapter 1 . 7/12
I would love a part 2 or 3 for this cause it definitely has potential
thundertail chapter 1 . 7/4
this was really awesome would be cool if this was a multi chapter story
Vinystark chapter 1 . 6/30
Amazing job, simply and great!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30
Amazing, instant fav!
Darinda chapter 1 . 5/29
This needs to be more than a one shot please! So good
Grannster10 chapter 1 . 5/23
was really good would be awsome if this became a series
BloodReaperZ chapter 1 . 5/19
Honestly, I'd like to see more of this what if, if possible. A "Yang brings a real boyfriend to the family" scene, heck, perhaps Summer would give bedroom tips over the table. Would Ruby ask for a drop of Jaunes blood to try since she hadn't drunk any at that point and would Yang be pocessive of such a fine blood bank? Who knows, other than the original Author anyway.
jonj1762 chapter 1 . 5/17
Very interesting and fun. great story.
Rakkis3059 chapter 1 . 5/16
This was a lot of fun. Wonderful job.
Abuhin chapter 1 . 5/15
Dragon slayer is becoming my favorite fic ship. As someone else in your comments section said, there's just something about aggressive Yang and dorky Jaune.
My personal favorite is how ff writers come up with ways for Yang to flaunt her breasts, then suddenly use cheesy, pun-based pick up lines. Impaled with wood. hahaha thanks
Proliferating Procrastination chapter 1 . 5/14
Hah! Should have made it more than a one-shot. Just casually make a story out of it, and see how it meshes with everything in the RWBY universe. I encouraged the same of Mallo in a review. They sent me over here!

I noticed some dialogue that wasn't super believable, but other than that, all was fine for a little smutty one-shot. Most people don't start sentences (talking to themselves no less) with 'Perhaps I should...' You'd be better off having that just read like, "Kind of hungry. Maybe I should find a bite to eat."
NoirReality chapter 1 . 5/14
Insert I Want here.
Draco711 chapter 1 . 5/14
Interesting. From the looks of it, their relationship will be lust first before growing genuine. Like to see this continue.
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