Hey, instead of writing this nonsensical garbage, where you just can't stop making straight characters fuck each other, how about you finish the stories people actually wanted? Huh, retard?

Freak.

Brilliant!

This is quite interesting. I wonder if rebellion still happens as it is later on...

DAMN, I would love to se more, it's an amazing concept the one you got here

Wow that was intense. Not a single dull moment to be had. Can’t wait to see part 2 if this is how part 1 is like. Strong as hell start

please post a chapter up here when you make the next part of this as I would dearly love to read more of this.

Ooooo this was good. Hoping for a part 2 please.

I loved it. please tell me your going to be doing a part two. I have to know what happens next.
please update soon
luner

Very good

So by becoming one of Elia's ladies does that mean she can no longer be engaged to Robert or do they still have to solve that problem? I'm hoping we get to see Lyanna change the way Women are treated in Westeros. Can't wait for part 2!

great! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

interesting! im curious as to what will happen next.

I really hope you continue this story line. It's off to a great start, that should really change the usual depressing future of the 'Game of Thrones'.

Great first chapter.

Thank you this is very well written, I cant wait for tbe next chapter