Cool story

This story looks like it could be interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.

A few small things to be aware of:
-Double check your tenses when you proofread. Most of the story is in past tense, but there are parts of this chapter in present tense. You should pick one and stick with it.
-The dates at the beginning of the chapters don't match up. Chapter 2 chapter clearly takes place before chapter 1, but the dates put it almost a year later.
-There are a few places at the end of this chapter where you have two different speakers in the same paragraph. In addition to being poor grammar, that also gets confusing for readers. You should split the paragraphs so that you never have more than one speaker in each one.
-Sirius calls Harry "James" at one point in this chapter. I'm not sure if that's your mistake or his mistake. If it is supposed to be Sirius's mistake, it seems odd to have him make that mistake unless you want to make a point about him being stuck in the past and just seeing Harry as James. And if you want to do that then it's fine, just doesn't feel like the type of fic to go into Harry and Sirius's relationship. But I could be wrong.

Let's see how this goes

Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

Lol. Harry in a superhero bodysuit? Ugh looks and sounds awful.

Interesting story pleas continue

Omg nooo I want more!

oh man this will be interesting. i wonder what the lois and dick will react.

A good start of the story and interesting combination of races.
I really do hope that this is a Daphne x Harry pairing because it becomes a bit overwhelming with all those slash.

Why cannot they make an option for stories with slash and without.

We really need to see the whole story of who found the horcrux and how things developed as well as reacting to dumbledore knowing about it and not doing anything. I assume this is prologue and these questions will be in the coming chapters before picking up story from here.

Seems interesting though it feels like more of a teaser than a intro first chapter. Assuming that background info will be given in the following chapters it will probably be great. Just that right now by itself it feels like a chapter 5 than a chapter 1.

I just read your story and please I’m on my knees, I’m begging you please update soon.