I got so excited after seeing you've uploaded the last chapter, honestly didn't expect you to do an update twice in one day. On a side note, when the new season premieres later on will you wait until season 3 is over or will you start writing chapters for the next story after each episode airs?

Great ending! Gonna have to be careful when season 3 comes out though.

Wow. I didn’t think you’d update two chapters in one day. Now Bolo’s freed, Nightfall’s sacrificed herself to be the sixth key, the Team Squad’s now in Final Space, they’ve saved Quinn and are now preparing for a big showdown with Invictus and the Titans. But Cetus has followed them and she and Invictus will merge and will become the “only god” and rule Final Space. Overall, pretty intense chapter. I thought The Closer You Get was intense, but this takes the cake. I thought Harp would live and be reunited with her sister, but she might be dead by the looks of it. At least Ash got to properly say goodbye to her in the end. Could you respond to me in the PM if Harp’s dead because I just want you to confirm her fate.
P.S. I have a theory the Lord Commander might be alive in Final Space. Nightfall said that every time she kills him, Invictus always take him. There might be more versions of him alive.

Alright, the Team Squad’s got all the Dimensional Keys, captured Sheryl, defeated Todd and are on their way to free Bolo! But Cetus is now following them and has Ash’s sister, Harp, as her captive and is planning to use her as the sixth key. Overall, great chapter with many action sequences. Honestly, the thing with the crew believing Bolo was evil was pretty dumb. They knew Bolo was incorruptible from Invictus and helped the Arachnitects trap the Titans in Final Space. And Sheryl was blinded by rage and heartbreak to realize that Oreksis was tricking her. Plus, I was really worried when Harp didn’t appear on Cetus’ ship but, after reading the ending I now know that you were saving her for The Sixth Key. Can’t wait to see what you have in stored for the last chapter!

Ah, villainous backstabbing!

Now Clarence has been left behind because of his betrayal, Fox is incapacitated and Cetus is one step closer to getting the last Dimsnional Key and merging with Invictus. Overall, great chapter. Thank you for adding Fly lashing out at Clarence for what he did. I never liked him. He deserved to be left behind. Also thanks for adding Ash warming up to Fly during the Carnivolo dinner and Fly taking her and Little Cato out of that strip club. She’s starting to become a better mom. Can’t wait for the battle with Cetus’ army in Descent into Darkness next chapter!
P.S. I think Sheryl was blinded by loss and anger that she couldn’t see that Oreskis was tricking her to get the keys like with the Lord Commander wanting to open Final Space to become a Titan and live forever. The Titans don’t give. They take.

Well, this was definitely a wham episode!

Will all this happening, a few question is flowing in my mind now. Like Gary ever forgive Fly or just hate her and wish for her death, or will Sheryl go ahead and try try to kill fly, or will the team truly stop Cetus and reclaim the dimension keys from her? I guess we'll find out. At least Little Cato chose to stick by Fly's side ever after everything she did.

Anyway I look to the next chapter and how will Fly react to Clarence stabbing every one in the back.

P.S. You do know that there will be a Third season of Final Space coming in early 2021?

My god. The father of Cetus is none other than Gary’s dad, John Goodspeed! That means Cetus is Gary’s sister! Now that Gary knows the truth he hates Fly now because she’s the reason his parents got divorced and was left alone after his father’s death because his mom blamed him for everything that happened, while in reality it was Fly. Sheryl is also shocked by this and has fled to find the Dimensional Key on Tera Con Prime (which Cetus already has). We now know from the Burner Tribe that anyone who crosses paths with Cetus becomes a mindless slave for her army. Now Todd’s been forced to join her, his ship has been destroyed and his Happy Place tech has been modified by Cetus to power her ship’s engines with people’s fear instead of happiness. Overall, a perfect chapter and wham episode (I’ve been on TV Tropes). Cetus is close to bonding with Invictus and becoming the “only god”. Thanks for showing us details for Cetus’s ship. This has got me hyped for The Set Up and Descent into Darkness.

I would like fly to adopt little cato so that he has a bigger role because some OCs do nothing and adopting him would give him a bigger role in the fanfic

I want fly to adopt small cato instead of gary so that his role becomes more important and like that of other oc that have no influence on history

i want fly adopt little cato instead of gary

Oh. My. God. This was more emotional than the original. Invictus first possessed Gary, then Fly who then possessed Avocato. Now the crew’s lost Avocato again thanks to Invictus and Fly’s apparently leaving the team because she believes she is “cursed”. So Invictus was the one who manipulated Jack into becoming the Lord Commander and has now manipulated Cetus into finding the Dimensional Keys so they can become one and absorb all the Titans in Final Space so they will be the “only god”. Overall, this was an emotional chapter. This has got me wondering what will happen to Fly and Little Cato next time in The Lost Spy. And will Fly reveal the truth about Cetus’s father later in the story?

Wow, a lot of ominous foreshadowing for Cetus. Is her father...Invictus?!

Good news is Avocato’s back! Bad news is he has amnesia. Now I’m dreading for Invictus’ possession in The Closer You Get. And it looks like Cetus has met Sammy before and now knows about the crew saving Avocato from her killing him and them trying to take the Dimensional Key in the past. Also, the Lord Commander knew who the father of Cetus is and that made him choose her to be his second. Fly’s not taking Avocato’s amnesia good and has resorted to drinking to numb the pain of her guilt. Overall, great and emotional chapter with Avocato’s amnesia. When Sammy told Cetus that her goal won’t be how she pictures it, I’m guessing that there will be more horrors beyond Final Space or she will be defeated in Descent into Darkness.
P.S. I’m hoping for Harp to break free of Cetus’ control and reunite with her sister later in the story.