Reviews for Power He Knows Not
AlphaFlash chapter 5 . 8/20
update?
penguins21fan21 chapter 5 . 8/16
This is great so far keep it up
TravisWMorgan chapter 5 . 8/9
Good story so far; but this chapter (5) is missing the end of statements for almost all the paragraphs. This in itself makes it a hard read. Please fix and repost.
todell57455 chapter 5 . 8/1
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/28
Arey Jha bhai kaha se ho
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BillBrink chapter 5 . 7/28
Thank you for your display of some imagination in this chapter. I know canon is pretty good in this year, but that doesn't mean that every story in FF has to follow each incident the same way just using different wording. I'm enjoying your story.
Imperiumm chapter 5 . 7/26
The story is great, pls continue
AlphaFlash chapter 5 . 7/22
update?
casey lord chapter 5 . 7/18
I want another sequel please and thank you
acmcnabb chapter 5 . 7/17
really enjoying this story! I like how you don't just make everything come easy to harry, yes he is more magically powerful, and he had some training but he's not just a God that can take out the troll with one hit. I also like how you haven't just jumped into harry and Daphne being in love at 11, that at this point they're just best friends. I'm looking forward to seeing how they're relationship progresses as they grow older. don't get discouraged by idiots who want to tear you down, they're just upset they can't write! Can't wait to read more, and hope you post soon!
Nagato chapter 5 . 7/16
Well the story got much better since u got a beta. Good work.
PTHC.FFN.CAD chapter 5 . 7/16
It is an interesting and fun read, your story share a bit of similarities with some of the Haphne stories: A sacrifice akin to the original and The Choices We Make (i.e., being soul bounded, both sort into another house together. Both Harry & Daphne starts young budding friendship.)

There is nothing to critic due to my own limitation of English language, but if I may post two questions to you and hopefully in answering those questions, it will help you understand where I am going with this review.

1. How do you envision this story to end? Those above mentioned fictions "died" and both stuck around 2nd and 3rd years Hogwarts. It is unclear as to why (maybe it really is that much of a grind.) So, maybe plan a shorter story line that will finish at 4th year (that seems to be a popular spot for some of the writers) and maybe earlier?

2. What are the potential conflicting friendships and relationships in the story as you keep writing? some of the similar Haphne fictions employee the worst love triangles since Twilight and the most boring unrequited love story since Ross and Rachel from Friends. Something to keep in mind as you write further.

I wish you ferocity and endurance for staying true to your creative vision and persevere against the long lonely road of a writer. But most importantly, I wish you fun, otherwise this really is unpaid slave labor lol

Thank you for sharing your work!
David Ezequiel chapter 5 . 7/15
La historia iba muy bien, me encantaba hasta ahora, y luego se jodio todo. En serio no pensaron en enviar a Hedwing a buscar a sus padres o mejor aún, a Amelia? Tiene a una heredera de sangre pura herida y a su amiga casi asesinada y lo unico que hace es quedarse a su lado? Si su idea de justicia es investigar lo que hay en el pasillo del tercer piso nisiquiera terminaré de leer el siguiente capitulo por lo estupida que es la razón para seguir el canon. Sin contar que Dumbledor puede saber donde esta Harry a pesar de estar bajo una de las reliquias que permite esconderse hasta de la muerte. Ojala se traten seriamente esos puntos en el seguiente capitulo, lo espero con ansias.
Cosrad chapter 5 . 7/8
Double check the chapters a bit before posting. I noticed you were forgetting to add in names to quite a few sentences. Made it a bit difficult to figure out who you were talking about.
Vanadir chapter 5 . 7/5
Thank you for a great story
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