Its pretty good you should continue it!

Oww nice! Yes to more girls pls.

good fic

Good start

Well, I definitely have some comment. Now, before I begin, I feel I should start by introducing myself to better set my tone. “I am the guy who updates his own stories so rarely, both the FF7 Remake and KH3 seemed like they would be teased at forever last time I posted a chapter.”

Okay, just a personal thing with me is the finding Natsu in the woods opening. I’m not a big fan of it, both because I’ve seen it enough times and because it kinda throws a wrench into things down the line for E.N.D... kinda like after the time skip in this with Igneel knowing about it despite randomly coming across Natsu’s group and not knowing if they went through the 400 year time jump, adding to the status of the Strauss siblings and how Mira and Rias joined in the plan.

I am interested in E.N.D.’s power being a thing from the beginning and how the mechanics of it will work.

Glad to see Rias brought in as a Crossover character (or COC as I like to refer to it). With Mira’s Satan Soul and the 72 households using the same devil motif, having them together like this requires some tinkering to avoid conflicting details, and while we don’t know yet if Mira’s magic is the same, using the multiverse to separate Rias’s households is a viable approach. I am a little disappointed that her outfit is just Dimaria’s.

I am a harem fan, but for now, I will only suggest for Seilah to be included. You already got two demon girls paired in, so why leave her out?

Asides from all that, there were a few places needing commas and capitalizations.

Looking forward to seeing what you have planned.

Great start

Nice chapter.
I love Mira and Rias
maybe you can add sayla so they are all half demons
keep going, can't wait for next chapter.