Reviews for When You Don't Expect The Unexpected— Rewrite |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. I loved how Perci handled Mrs. Dobbs and Nancy. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh that last roasting was absolutely delightful! Tres bein! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can we call charmspeak ability be called an aspect of Siren powers? It comes from Aphrodite, directly; who was the eldest goddess and if she wishes, the most powerful of the council. She screwd up lives of even big three, time to time. Lets just say they’re two different abilities. But the danger in the Siren speak is , it poisons mind in a visionary way, calling someone towards them. I do think that’s better than illusion, Annabeth saw her mom, dad are living happily, Luke is smiling and they called her to them. She was living a fantasy because of Siren's call, and she had no idea of it, despite being smart. Your interpretation of Sirens sounds great. Gaea and Tartarus brought forth monstrous beings like Gigantes, Typhon and rest. Sirens are beings of water, yet they have no problem living in an island, like centuries. How about the chance of them being daughters of Pontus and Gaea? Good chapter. Loved it. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly really enjoying this! Especially the fact that I can't entirely predict the plot, something that is altogether too common in longer PJO fics. Great work, keep it up! 3 |
![]() ![]() That was good can't wait for more keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() You did a very good job can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() This was very good can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() The wait was well worth it you knocked it out of the park with this chapter can't wait to see what you're going to do for us next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Can’t wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Any demigods you want to add? I recommend Annabeth, di Angelos, Katie Gardner, Will Solace. Siren powers aren’t same as Charmspeak, its illusionary casted from voice. And technically, Sirens were handmaidens of Persephone, who was banished by Hades after cutting off their wings, yet there are many myths about them, so you can say they’re originated from sea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. I love your story and idea of a female Percy. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting new beginning. I can't wait to read what more changes you make. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() Looking good can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cool! I hope your AP test goes well. Is it the English Lang & Comp? I should be studying for that but I clearly am not. |