Sue me.. I am in the corner crying ..

This was a little gift :)

woah. just, woah. that was really, REALLY good.

I literally have no words to express how freaking good was that. I wonder though, are you leaving this as oneshot, or are you bringing more? I hope the latter, because... wow. I'll keep an eye out for ya.

-cas

this Hurts but i really love this concept. great fic!

Well fu-

This was great. Very well written, despite the fact that I’m in tears. Immortality is one thing people want but always regret if they achieve it. Anyway, you’re a great author and I’m late

You know what?

I normally don't write reviews, but sir, you had my curiosity... now you have my attention.

I dislike you (JK I love you no homo or whateverfor this story. I was almost on the edge of tears and my heart was on verge of breaking I had to watch who knows other videos of sad videos like that of Halo Reach Noble Team deaths and even other sad anime characters deaths just to get me over this story. And it is still not working.

This story was so damn heartbreaking and written beautifully because I always had an idea of a story where Elsa is cursed with immortality after becoming the 5th spirit and she's outlives everyone she loves due to the curse. Of course, in the idea of mine, all of her family is reborn through different incarnations in modern times and she meets them and befriends them... bah I'm babbling now.

Anyways, disregard that I dislike you and just know that you're a great writer with amazing talent for invoking emotions in people. Seriously, this is like my longest review to date and I have never really been impressed by much fanfics on the site. This story was really powerful and I felt like wanting to hug Elsa and tell her that it would be fine even though it wasn't. You see, many people wish of being immortal for who knows what reason (vampires specifically) but what of those gifted with it that don't want it (DeadPool all the way)? And the part where she sees the memory of her and Anna as children and saying she doesn't want her powers anymore? I... I... give me a moment here... *proceeds to watch a Bread Boys video to prevent tears from coming out* Alright I'm back. Where was I? Oh right of course.

This story was written to perfection and perhaps I might have the inspiration now to possibly do a fanfic story around this sort of concept, if it's alright with you. You are a great writer with great potentially and I hope you stay safe during these times (seriously I watched more Frozen 2 videos during these difficult times than even before it happened) and keep on writing on stories like this one, even if breaks the onions more. Until then, keep getting your game on, rev up your writing skills into overdrive, and head on into the unknown. In other words, stay safe and keep writing amazing stories!

PS: Can I PM on how you do the lines in the fanfics? I never really figured out how to do that?

ok this fucked up

It's such a horrible fate...one day, the world will change beyond recognition, but elsa will still be there, dreaming of making olaf with anna in the ballroom...

Are you gonna continue this?

Or is this a one shot?
I love this concept of Elsa being Immortal! Would love to see her leaving Ahtohallan and navigating the world, meeting up with other versions of her beloved friends and family, and who knows?
When time comes for The End of All Things to take place, she can finally rest, and is joyfully, tearfully reunited with the ones she loves after so many years!

Thanks for ripping my heart out at 9am. Beautiful way to start the day.

On a side note: this is so painstakingly beautiful I have no idea how you wrote this art. Bravo and literally full chef's kiss to you.

Sweet opening. I'll keep an eye on this.