Reviews for Twists of Fate
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27
I really loved your story meeting the first woman to love Lee! It got me thinking of a song I cover the water front.
The Lyrics are...
Away from the city that hurts and knocks,
I'm standing alone by the desolate docks
In the still and the chill of the night
I see the horizon the great unknown
My heart has an ache
It's as heavy as stone
Will the dawn coming on, make it light
I cover the waterfront
I'm watching the sea
Will the one I love
Be coming back to me
I cover the waterfront
In search of my love
And I'm covered by
A starlit sky above
Here am I
Patiently waiting
Hoping and longing
Oh how I yearn
Where are you
Are you forgetting
Will you remember
Will you return
I cover the waterfront
I'm watching the sea
Will the one I love
Be coming back to me.
Well, I was thinking maybe you could write something about Jennifer and Mathew during world war 2 or Lee and Amanda with this song in mind. It's really a pretty song and I hope it helps your muse in writing something with it! I know if anyone can do it! I know you can! Thank you! :-)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25
Excellent! I really enjoy your stories. I hope you continue to share your works with this fandom. Thanks.
Truckee Gal chapter 1 . 5/24
This is such a compelling STORY and so well written.
Please consider expanding this wonderfully conceived one-shot into a few more chapters.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23
That was bloody Terrific! I enjoyed it immensely! I'm chuffed to bits with your story telling. Thank you for sharing such a lovely story with us.
Laulette2727 chapter 1 . 5/22
You had write a beautifull prequel of unfinished business. A young lady thinking to her futur and her family with hope. Thanks for your story.
Karen LaManna chapter 1 . 5/22
Great start! I hope this will be a multi-chapter story? Nice to see something from Lee’s side of the family! I liked Jennifer’s inner thoughts!

Good job so far!