Enjoyed the story can’t wait for the next chapter, also think you’ll have Akira make some apple curry for the Apple family

this has potential let's see where this goes

Dude, I'm really enjoying what you're putting down right now. The first thing that came to mind was the fact you're taking a more original approach with this crossover. Now, what do I like?

1. Akira is portrayed pretty well here, along with Morgana. The two have a nice chemistry and play off each other nicely. As for the girls, I like how you're not making them one-note like most. Pinkie, for example, has a moment where she sympathizes with Akira about not having many friends. Keep that up as I'm enjoying these interactions so far.

2. The Arcanas are an interesting touch, though I see you're taking the more literal approach. I mean, Pinkie's the Fool, despite it meaning a new journey and a blank slate. Doesn't make it bad, just pointing out from what I remember. Makes me curious about who would have the other Arcanas, though.

3. The MLP cast using transformations instead of Personas is a nice substitute. Though, I don't agree that them having Personas would be out-of-character, as a Persona is a manifestation of the true self, which the Elements are pretty much that. But, it's your story in the end and I'll be reading it either way.

4. Just a thought, but you said that you've played the original and are currently playing Royal. Is there gonna be elements from Royal or is it just the original for this story?

Other than that, this story got me hooked. Take your time and write from the heart, I can tell this will be quite the ride.

Oh yeah, reminder that the whole pairing thing I was saying, that was just my opinion (and my suggestion). So if you feel like you want to ship Akira with someone, well... I suppose I'm fine with that, as long as it doesn't turn out to be messy afterwards. You know what I mean hehe.

Great chapter! I'm waiting for more as usual.

Well there's nothing much I need to point out, it's already great as it is. But I would like to tell you some of my thoughts on this chapter as well as for upcoming chapters.

1. I actually was expecting Akira to say 'Itadakimatsu' before he ate his pie... It would be nice to see what would the others reacts to Akira's Japanese culture and such. Not that it's very major to change it, so it's ok.

2. At this point I could foresee that Akira would make his, ahem, harem with the Mane 6 (thanks his charisma for that). Of course he didn't actually realize it (not that he's completely dense) while Morgana would always noticed this because he wasn't fool to not notice the situation.
Which leading us to the pairing stuff. To make this fiction feels undisturbing and comfortable to read, I suggest, perhaps, that you should maintain the relationship with Akira and (one of) the Mane Six. Like no need to cross the line and to go so far as making one of them confess their feeling or fall in love with him. That, and like you said, he won't stay at Canterlot High for long, so I don't think Akira had enough time to build 'romantic' relationships with them. Just a simple moment (like the one with him and Pinkie Pie in previous chapter), make them blush like anime girl would usually do (not that Equestria Girls is an anime), make them have a crush/feeling on him (like what happened with AJ just now), you know the list.
So in summary, no need for pairing, but make sure to make moments between him and every single of the girls. I believe that would satisfy the readers. Fun fact, I actually like the moment of Akira and Pinkie Pie in chapter 2 before, and that alone already made me hype (not sure about the other readers tho). I hope you understand what I mean from this. Hehe, can't wait to see it.

3. There's small few errors/mistake on wording. Again, not very major, so you could just leave it be. After all, once you hooked on the story, you'll only focus on the plot story than the wording.

4. ...I genuinely didn't expect that last part, about you pointing what we can learn from My Little Pony. I actually smiled at this.

Well I suppose that's all I want to say. Whew, my thumb feels sore. If there's anything I should add, I will review it again. Take care and as usual, I'll be waiting for next chapter.

so far its really good i dont usually read MLP fan fiction but it has potential.

I would love to see a new chapter, this story is just getting started and you already have me aboard this crazy train.

Ah... the idea of make the girls have their own Persona...

Honestly, I suggest no. That would turn them into OC (in a sense). That, and do you even have an idea what Persona would they using? If anything, old style fashion more preferable to them. (They have their own unique way to fight after all. There's reason why Magic is Friendship)

That's just my opinion. This is your fiction. Whatever idea you have, I won't complain.

This story... is FANTASTIC! Of course I want next chapter, up till this fanfic complete.

Since I am both MLP fan and Persona fan (Persona 3 mostly), I'm quite liking this much actually. And there is something I want to point it out, but I kinda forget what again, which prove that in my opinion, this is definitely good.

Speaking of pointing out, Fool Arcana for Pinkie Pie? And here I thought Twilight, or at least all Six Mane, would be the Fool Arcana one for Social Link (or Confidant in P5)

Well overall I can't wait for more. I'm not asking you to rush it, but it would satisfy the readers if you could complete this fanfiction without something to distract you from continuing the story. I mean, in Equestria girls' original story, it only took 30 minutes for a movie, so it's not going to take a long time to make the chapters... right?

Ah another thing. Usually in text, Applejack would say 'Ah'm' instead of 'I'm' and 'Mah' instead of 'My' due to her accent of course. Although it's unnecessary because you already good at portraying her. So don't take it too much.

That's all, and stay safe. I'm waiting for next chapter.