Reviews for Crossing The Veil
Xerzo LotCN chapter 25 . 9/18
probably the power she borrowed turning izukus green is a bit much probably shouldn't have done that lol could cause problems
besides that great fight

im assuming everyone was super worried about izuku when he gave her power not that they knew but how did izuku explain why his quirk acted up

super fluffy ending is nice
will the date be on screen or off screen hope we see it then the lemon lol
Tactical-Magician chapter 1 . 9/17
Good story so far.
crazybeebee chapter 25 . 9/17
I'm so happy to see more of this. Not only of Nana being a fucking badass, but also seeing a bit of Nana/Izuku moments.
Ranger McAleer chapter 25 . 9/17
Can't wait for the date.
Yamajiji chapter 25 . 9/17
That was pretty cool. Nana was badass here, and I didn’t expect what you did with OFA there.
Nabe-Chan chapter 24 . 9/6
lol. first of hawks why da fu do you care? second, is that hard to think of I don't know "well i call him gramps when he visited me in America, he trained my dad." did their brain melted? or you did this on purpose for laughs? at first it was hella funny but when hawks started asking question it got annoying reeeeeeally fast. its like your putting so much holes to their lies so that the everyone can figured it out eventually.
Cosmyk Angel chapter 24 . 9/5
I loved her reaction to Hawks and Hawks' reaction to her supposed lineage.

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Xerzo LotCN chapter 24 . 9/5
that is a great way to explain it different then my suggestion but great
how it seems to go is sora had a daughter that had a some what different flight quirk who got with allmight who had nana who herself got a weaker super power and the different flight quirk as the story goes now

also it been a funny come back well my date is with allmight successor the one he see as a son so the one guy he would have never punted into the sun who one day will be even stronger then allmight

this situation is now that joke about becoming your on grand father but different
ok see izuku see allmight as a dad
allmight see nana as a mother thus izuku grandma in a way
nana is now placed as allmight daughter dating izuku
izuku is now both allmight son figure and dad figure
nana is both izuku girlfriend and grandmother figure
final izuku is now his own grandfather figure
lol
tiguylerobot chapter 24 . 9/4
why i have the feeling hawk will became nana and izuku best drunk buddy in a few days...
balut76 chapter 24 . 9/4
I want Nana to spar with Mirko next.
Yamajiji chapter 24 . 9/4
Nana and All Might was pretty heartwarming. I think he’s ready to know that Izuku and Nana are actually dating. I’m looking forward to Nana vs Hawks/Gran Torino too. Its gonna be epic. Nice job dude, keep up the good work.
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 23 . 8/31
Ochako is the bestest bud!
RomanCrusader chapter 23 . 8/29
Love the story, just read the entirety of it in one go, really engages and draws you in. The relationship between Deku and Shimura is well written and it's development comes across as very realistic, to be honest, in my opinion it's close to flawless.

Personally I'm a huge fan of Shimura's true identity being unknown to everyone, but Deku and All Might (and others already mentioned), or at least the majority of the class. With her being known, for me, it would lessen some of the humour and would affect her ability to act like all the other UA students. I'd love for Bakugo to have more contact with Shimura, as opposed to keeping his distance and researching her. The fight scene, for example, between the two of them was fantastic.

Of course you're the Author and you've done a excellent job so far, so whatever you have planned I'm sure will live up to that. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Xerzo LotCN chapter 23 . 8/29
god bakugou a fucking dumbass digging into this especially he now thinks she is some Killswitch last resort fucking noumu if she was a noumu allmight izuku and nedzu the teaching staff hearing it from allmight mouth would not support her story he literally just a sore loser
also if he thought it had to do with ofa he would immediately drop it or go to izuku or allmight instead of being a dumbass and dragging other like kiri or chako into it thus potentially revealing the secret
he can't back down because of pride and he doesn't even realize it he rejected izuku for the longest rejected izuku as allmight successor and now he rejecting someone allmight confirms as his kid (even if it is false) all because of it seemingly

you know a perfect way to explain nana if bakugou doesn't deserve the truth especially his meddling so he should not get it is one of two ways those being
the original nana was his teacher he was sweet on her daughter and they had a kid named after her grandmother who died saving young toshi live current nana got a 3rd gen float and a weaker allmight strength quirk
or
two a wacker but still realistic one the original nana is technically current nana's mother allmight childhood sweet heart was sterile so nana donated an egg and had it frozen for them for later being allmight mother figure wanted him to havd a family she couldn't have herself
they used it much later to have a kid and since the original nana died protecting them they named current nana after her and she got original nana float and a weaker version of allmight super strength
fencer29 chapter 23 . 8/28
So who can Bakugo really discuss these suspicions with? He can't exactly go up to All Might and ask him why he has a "daughter" who apparently died thirty years previously. Nor can he say much to Aizawa without risking have to reveal his suspicions about her appearance somehow being related to One For All (a secret to which Aizawa is not privy - although All Might probably should have told him about OFA at back in Midoriya's first year).

In fact Uraraka would probably have an easier time discussing Bakugo's findings with Aizawa simply because she has no knowledge of OFA and therefore not secret which she feels the need to protect. After which I'd imagine Aizawa would probably go straight to Nezu's office and demand an explanation.
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