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   CrackHeadBlonde chapter 13 . 1h Awhhh I love her with the girls! So cute |
| Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 12 . 7/29 Great chapter. |
| WriteAndDream23 chapter 12 . 7/27 Excellent! Interested to learn more about Lex’s relationships outside of Embry too, esp with her father. I have a working theory about her mother’s death but not positive... great writing as always! |
| Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 11 . 7/21 Cute chap |
| yearningin2020 chapter 11 . 7/21 PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS! I'm so bored in quarantine and your writing is really good and there's the perfect amount of yearning! I made an account to send you this 3 |
| writhing chapter 11 . 7/20 Alright, so I wanted to wait to review until I caught up, and now that I have, I must say that I ADORE this story. I haven’t read many Embry/OC stories because hashtag Team Jacob 4ever, but damn am I in love with the way you narrate each scene. Your writing is so...so precise and descriptive at the same time that I sit and reflect upon what I just read; usually, the thought is, “Damn, that was good.” AND THE SLOWBURN. You are so talented at progression and writing the characters in a way that shows their growth. I AM IN AWE. And I’m really curious about Lex’s relationship with her dad. AND I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE THE PACK’S INTERACTIONS. They’re so funny and lighthearted and supportive and connected and I live for it. I get so much enjoyment from reading this story, and I look forward to reading more! :-) |
| WriteAndDream23 chapter 11 . 7/20 Great chapter! I enjoy the slow and steady development |
| Shola2001 chapter 11 . 7/20 At last, cuteness! |
| Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 10 . 7/15 Great chap |
| WriteAndDream23 chapter 10 . 7/14 Really loved your choice with the legends! I’m excited to see where you go with this story - I really like Lex as a character, and I’m glad to see her start to develop relationships/feelings. Well done! |
| CrackHeadBlonde chapter 9 . 7/9 Hahah poor Seth, excited for the bonfire! :) |
| Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 9 . 7/8 Liked it. |
| beyondbored321 chapter 9 . 7/7 I love the way you write! Lex is a fascinating character and I love her friendship with Kim! Keep writing :) |
| Frankie chapter 8 . 7/5 Okay, so I've only recently come across this story, and boy am I hooked! I used to love Twilight as a teen (I'm now 24) and the way you've portrayed Embry is exactly how I would have imagined he'd be had he been given a bigger role in the series. The storyline always has me on the edge of my seat to see how the relationship between Lex and Embry grows and changes and your writing is just amazing! I cant wait to read more! |
| Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 8 . 7/3 Nice chap |
