Keep it up I love this story please.

Keep it up I love this story please.

I get the whole balance thing until the humans declared war. After these bad elements harm Dragnof citizens, there should be no rest for the wicked until permanent ceasing of the would be invaders aggressions. After the trash have been properly disposed of, then peaceful balance can be pursued.

He should claim that mech at some point. It seems very handy.

Alright, so this is quite honestly shit. While I admit a FT/MGE crossover does excite me, the first chapter is just so poorly made I can't read any further. Fix the NUMEROUS grammatical, punctuation, and other errors that are likely all over the place, and this would be one of the better fics I have found. You have a real diamond in the rough here, all you need to do is polish it till it shines.

He's already contracted with all his wives, the ice kingdom and many of his subjects to keep them safe. So how are his people being harmed and killed in his kingdom? The drama is nonsensical. I'll take a break from this because my damaged brain isn't having fun now. Thanks.

No one in Dragnol has magic to utilize the stones with the earth as a means to defend the kingdom? No one's magic controls the waters of the seas? The ice magics should be strengthened because they're defending the ice kingdom. The drama is a little thick while disregarding home field advantage. Before by using the ice kingdom the queen was freezing the continent. Now her vassals can barely build a wall of ice in their front yard. I'll read more to find maybe it makes sense.

Why not just teleport the aggressors to the other side of the world of bury them as they depart to cause trouble, sink the naval while freezing the air forces?

You gotta be young for so many small energetic children.

Fantasy virgin girls need no foreplay or training to accept anything in their cunny unlike real life maidens barely able to after 30 minutes take my pinky while learning to breathe and relax into it all in order for the pleasures to take over.

The smut is without much variety. The wives all have similar sexual needs, which is very unlikely. Hope this helps.

Being creepy which forces your only child away is never recommended.

What's in the bushes grabbin the baby?

Good chapters all.

That's the best way I've heard of to join two kingdoms together. All good chapters. Thanks.

Ice Queen must receive proper training.