Reviews for Crashing Into Darkness
KrskaDenis chapter 11 . 8/7
Pettigrew should escape and attempt to attack Evan at the end of the year?
SageMask4 chapter 11 . 8/5
Great update
And damn Dumbledore is a serious prick wanting to Krios back to the Dursley’s for the sole purpose of having a safe haven for Evan.
Low . Really low
For third year maybe the Potters take Reg to court for “kidnapping” Krios
mizzrazz72 chapter 11 . 8/5
Draco is making a mess of himself.
CittingAlmond42 chapter 11 . 8/5
Good chapter, particularly liked the Dumbledore section I look forward to seeing more alternative POVs throughout the story. I would say have another death eater break out of Azkaban for year 3. Have year 3 also be the year that Sirius is reintroduced into the story and try to build a relationship with harry, how it turns out is up to you but I vote for it to end in disaster.
Could we have more interaction with Evan as well please?
dragoon109 chapter 11 . 8/5
i would like to see snape with family my self.
fernyyuki chapter 11 . 8/5
puede ser peter
Sparky She-Demon chapter 11 . 8/5
I'd say something new entirely. Also might you have Krios catch three certain Gryffindors in the Slytherin common room? I love it when that happens!
bloodstorm365 chapter 11 . 8/5
Well is peter pettigrew in azkaban maybe he escapes or bellatrix' husband lestrange maybe a intamite moment between Bellatrix and Krios also you have given hints that krios will/may/is developing a crush on Astoria and that most girls from slythrin may develop a crush or go after him because of his status but will it be a harem (small, large, overwhelming) or a pairing of Astoria and krios I'd also like to see if possible him interacting with Luna (one of best girls) as he I feel could connect as she is pretty much outside the 'norm' and bullied quite a lot
magnoliarossa chapter 11 . 8/5
I think third year is important to 4th, I think you can add character during the 3th year to use in the 4th, otherway a quite year of study
the stargate time traveller chapter 11 . 8/5
I don't understand the logic - why the hell would he go back to the Dursleys? He hates them, surely Dumbledore's not that out of it to not notice that fact? I doubt Krios would give a thought about them if they were on fire. And as for James... he would have caused all kinds of trouble, singling out Krios, causing problems for the Slytherins... it would have pushed him away even more.
Pansy's as subtle as a bull in a china shop, but it would be interesting to see how far you plan on taking things.
As for Third year, how about something new?
Helily chapter 10 . 7/30
Yes, Astoria is definitely underutilized so I look forward to what you have planned for her. Based on her name alone I always liked her. Like your Altair, as well. Plus, I enjoy seeing friendly sibling relationships so thank you for that.

This is becoming more and more intriguing as the chapters continue. ️️
Helily chapter 9 . 7/30
I love the name Krios. One of the few K names I can like.

I’ve read a lot of HP fics and a lot of twin fics in this fandom. You still somehow end up surprising me; I have enjoyed everything thus far, including extra people being alive. Besides, as someone who likes Severus, I appreciate when someone gives him friends (total sucker for friendship in fictionXD).
Keramian chapter 10 . 7/29
Is this novel going to be a single pairing or multi-pairing?
sandipi chapter 10 . 7/29
Thank you for the new chapter. Dumbledore has to be losing his mind. Harry was supposed to be the meek backup, the afterthought. Now Krios is a problem.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/29
Interesting story. I hope your story is not going to be like some other stories, where Dumbledore attempts to force Krios/Hardwin to reunite with his biological family.
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