I LOVE THIS I can't wait to read the longer one you mentioned, I'd REALLY love to read that one too.

This was absolutely chilling in the best way. I love the way you build up to this choice that Cavendish has to make, and Cavendish's determination shining through. Seeing Dakota in this state was hard to read because I love him so much, but I can see how B.o.T.T. would take his actions seriously. He did break a major time rule, but I'm with Cavendish in that Dakota doesn't deserve to be treated like that. Amazing job!

aww! I love these two so much, and I'm so glad Cavendish defended Dakota :)