Reviews for The Heart of Eden
Deathzbreath chapter 8 . 23h
Absolutely loving this story thank you!
Guest chapter 8 . 8/11
Another big thumbs up for this chapter. Looking forward to your next update.
HellsMaji chapter 5 . 8/11
Yup.. Just like chuck to be a dumbass and put the pregnant dolphin in attack mode just days before she gives birth..
HellsMaji chapter 3 . 8/10
Pretty dumb of chuck to think he might see her early in the morning when he first saw her at night. And pretty dumb of ellie to give away that chuck was interested in a girl in front of another girl that ellie wants him to meet. That'll really make him extra embarrassed when Sarah realizes she's both girls.
Kent G chapter 8 . 8/10
Loved it. It such a unique and interesting world you’ve created. So different from canon and yet you can still relate to each character. That’s a true talent you have there. More, please.
calaris829 chapter 8 . 8/10
It took 8 chapters for the Intersect to finally make an appearance but it's oh so worth it! Chuck and Sarah just cant get a break can they? Are they ever going to even get to the 1st date? Love this story, it's adorable and heartwarming.
ReaderNotAWriter85 chapter 8 . 8/10
Absolutely amazing chapter. I loved it. I can't wait for more. Thank you so much for sharing this with us
Kacper983 chapter 8 . 8/10
Great chapter. You had fun writing it, and I had fun reading. Everybody wins. The ending was decidedly the best part of it; the hug, and the test with Finn.
Greg6419 chapter 8 . 8/10
Very cool! Great job, as usual. Waiting ever so impatiently for the next chapter!
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Stef chapter 8 . 8/10
Love the update! many thanks! :)
Joshua Kinston chapter 2 . 8/10
This chapter was a blast. Between Peaches and Morgan, I was in stitches. As Devon would say, awesome.
Gloria1229 chapter 8 . 8/10
Awww. That was just precious. Little Echo looks to have just as big of a crush on our favorite nerd as Sarah does. And who could blame her. Pretty impressive stuff he and Lazlo brought to the table. Wow! Can't wait to here what Sarah must be thinking right about now. At least she didn't have time to think about it before she launched herself at Chuck. If she did she'd probably spoil it for herself somehow. Those two need some serious help. I think it's time for big sister to step and lock them both in a room to get on the same damn page. Ugg. Nice job, as always.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/10
Excellent chapter. Looking forward to the next one. Please update soon.
fezzywhigg chapter 8 . 8/10
As much as you had writing, I had so much fun reading this chapter! Sarah's not the only one excited. That robot and the translator are amazing!
nevr chapter 8 . 8/10
That was a great chapter. It’s hard to imagine how Chuck, even with Laszlo’s help, could achieve so much in such a short space of time. The Intersect alone would seem like months of work, but the Morgan upgrade unbelievable. Putting that sense of disbelief aside, the interactions were all great. Ellie’s comments about Chuck & Sarah were spot on following Sarah’s spiral. Laszlo knows his friend well and his teasing fun here. Eden’s reaction to Chuck definitely bodes were for the future. And finally the hug/kiss - so glad Lou froze. Perfect.
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