Nice chapter. I think I have something I can learn from you: how do I write 10,000 word chapters?

What's up fellas? Author here, i just want to say that im gonna give up on thi- SIKE HAHAHAHAHAH

The reason why i haven't udpated yet in a long time is because i have home chores and i usually write my chapters at night, don't worry though, im not giving uo on this story, im actually halfway done trough the next chapter. Thank you all for your patience and support, love y'all. Stay safe out there.

I'll stop trying to pm you. Sorry if I have distressed you at all. I will stop contacting you

I like your story plea updat soon. I will frequently read it because it is so freaking good t read

Excellent update

Akame x Tatsumi or harem if possible possible please. Also great first chapter.

Yay I leik this story a lot it is great. I cannot wait to see everyone kill each other in their own insanity and maybe a yandere or two appear. I wonder if akame will slaughter the dog we call esdeath for wanting her man. YAY so much blood will rain.
No joke though my dude this is a great story so please update it soon, just make sure you don't do another all nighter, you can die from a lack of sleep.
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that fight was freaking awesome. i loved reading it. i have a question though, besides a water dragon can tatsumi:
make a fire dragon
encase himself in water to defend and 'fly'(kinda. basically the pokemon move aqua jet)
and can tatsumi create ice?
also i have tried to talk to you via PM. i'm guessing you have a busy scheduel but i would like to hear back from you if you have a spare moment. sorry if that was rude

Personally, I think you did a great job. The fight scene was really engaging. My one criticism is that you could describe a little more this constant flux skill that tatsumi has. You could describe the attacks he makes and how that affects his opponent. For example in a third person view you could go for something like this:
Akame and Tatsumi locked swords, battling for dominance. Tatsumi knew he needed to think fast or he may lose this round but what could he do...
Before anyone knew what was happening, tatsumi had directed akame's sword away from him,, forcing her forward. Quickly he activated constant flux and started a vicious barrage, attempting to strike Akame by the neck, then the head, try and trip her up with a slash to the legs, jump back and then leap towards and deal a devastating blow towards the head. akame narrowly blocks, but she loses her balance, falling back and now at tatsumi's mercy.
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This might be okay as an example, I'm not sure. Also, something that I recommend is trying to take liberaties with this. It doesn't have to be anything big, like maybe just picking up some sand and throwing it into the eyes of an opponent, temporarily blind them giving you enough time to slit their neck.
Also another thing you could do is try a 1st person point of view in combat. By getting a personal view on something, it can really enhance what your reading, it gives more tension and a greater atmosphere to the fight. It can give a greater atmosphere to anything really. You could then mention how a strike affects someone: take for example in a fight between... iyesu and tatsumi, tatsumi could duck a swing from iyesu (I doubt I am spelling his name right) and then tatsumi could jump forward and hit iyesu in the ribcage. When that happens you can describe the pain iyesu would be in and how he chooses to respond. However, at this point it feels more like me forcing my ideas on you, so I'll stop here. If you want to use the examples I gave go right ahead, just make sure it fits your style of writing otherwise it's like another author wrote. It wouldn't be the same. I like the unique styles each writer has. God now I am rambling. Sorry.

i like the idea of ieyasu x mein. i'm waiting to see how that goes. it sounds great. can we talk in via PM? i'd like to offer help in fight scenes if needed. crap i wasn't rude there was i?

stories where there is fantasy gives writers free reign. my advice... try and use magic if it goes with the character, mention the actions in a passive sense and be descriptive. for example, look at this fight scene i wrote:
Barry immediately ran up to me and threw I right hook. I stepped back enough that he missed astronomically. I then launched a kick into his chest, but Barry caught it. I forgot how quick his reflexes are. I started to be spun around like some kind of ragdoll, and then he threw me some few feet high. I knew he was strong but this is ridiculous! I started falling and I thought really hard. My arms turned to vines and I made them grow long enough that they stopped me from hitting the ground. I focused even harder and my entire body turned into a dragon that has moss on it's wings, vines guarding it's legs and a solid layer of bark over it's body. I looked at my new body in shock and I noticed that I thankfully didn't have any destroyed clothes. Barry silently, stared in shock, but he quickly recomposed himself. I don't know what he did or how he did it, but he made his arms and legs gain a strong, obsidian armour. He then shocked me to the core:
He made lava armour for his head, torso and to cover any cracks between the rocks on his limbs. I was now a bit worried, as it was clear at this point that Barry may be new to this, but he somehow knew what he was doing. He quickly ran at me he swung his arm when he was close by, however he lacked the range to hit me. He clearly knew this, because several crystalline disks were swung from his arm. I tried to move, but I was still adapting to my new body, leaving me with nowhere to run and the crystal disks slammed into my chest sending my back a few feet. I tried to focus and I forced vines up from the floor of the dojo. They grew taller than some of the tallest trees I have seen, and they wrapped around each other. Like a cruise missile, they shot towards Barry, who to defend himself, curled up into a ball and rolled against the vines, smashing them. He continued to roll like an boulder, but now straight towards me. I started to panic: one hit from that could easily knock me out. Then I remembered that I have wings. I started to flap and flap and flap and I took to the air. I looked to the floor to see the stone golem Barry staring at me. I felt a little nervous. He threw back his arm and slung it forward, launching those pesky disks. I quickly evaded all of them, only to be struck by a boulder! I fell to the ground, but landed on my feet.
"Holy shit Barry! Chill the hell out!" I exclaimed.
Instead of taking my advice, Barry pointed his arms at me and they transformed into stone lazer cannons, with what looked like diamonds on the inside, which quickly glowed and then fired at me. Seeing the jeopardy I was in, I tried to transform into something else and I became myself but covered in steel like armour made of bark. As Barry fired, I leapt over to a nearby wall, and then jumped off it. I forced my arm to transform into a sword and I made a spin to the left and slashed him in the left side of his lower abdomen. He stepped back and looked down to where I hit him: there was a part of his armour missing. He made magma appear there, and it solidified and cooled. Obsidian retook the empty spot just before I could use a vine as a whip. Barry caught the whip and pulled the whip, pulling me too. I came off my feet and landed in his hand. He held me by the neck and then with his free hand, jabbed me in the solar plexus. I fell to the floor, winded and now very alarmed. I just noticed that there were four arms, two blasters and two hands, and they were poised at me. I needed to think fast and I looked at the ground, and then my left arm, which was behind my back. I had an idea. I made a vine dig into the ground and if my theory is right, Barry would feel the vibrations, which he did and he punched floor under him but only found an empty tunnel. I got to my feet and used the whip again. It wrapped around his right blaster arm and hauled him towards me. I made my feet gain steely bark spikes and I jumped and using a roundhouse kick from my right leg, I sent Barry flying into a wall. He very quickly got to his feet and looked at me. He stared at me straight in the eyes, but he somehow failed to notify that the vine I used to whip him now snaking up from the ground behind him. It slowly moved through the ground and around his neck, until it looked like a lillipup collar, chains coming from the bottom and into the ground. I pulled on the vine with the arm it stemmed from and it forced Barry to smack his head chin first on the ground. I then made the vine unearth itself and again pulled Barry over to me. I punched him just s he was about to hit me and he flew into the air. I made my other arm grow an extendable flail out of vines and I swung it above my head and into his chest, sending him higher. I thought he would try and call it off at this point but instead he readied his blasters and crystal disks and fired at me. I swiftly evaded them, but he fell to the ground with asteroid like speed and the darted right at me. He swung his fist into my face, with tectonic force and I was sent spiralling to the ground. He stomped his foot on the ground and giant columns of stone spiked up from the ground. I tried to rise to my feet, but the ground beneath me gave way to a stone column, and I was sent flying up and I hit the ceiling. The impact probably would have broken my spine, but, thanks to my armour, it only hurt like hell. I fell to the ground and my body ached. Barry walked over to me and he now had two more arms which ended with hammers. They raised and each one smashed themselves on my back. I tried to stand but only wound up on my knees.
Wham…
Wham…
Wham…
They hit my back harder every time.
Wham…
Wham…
Wham…
My arms and legs are about to give way. It didn't help that one was a flail.
WHAM…
WHAM…
….
Nothing came. I noticed that one of the vines I grew was now fighting for me. It pulled the hammer arm to the ground and Barry now was immobilised. Barry's other hammer arm, blasters and hands tried to break the vine, but nothing was seemingly working. Another vine grabbed an arm, and another, and another, and another, until all arms were held in place. Barry seemed furious at this point. He struggled against the vines but as hard as he tried he couldn't break free. I swung my flail arm at Barry and it cracked his head armour. A small chip of obsidian came off, but magma soon took it's place. I swung my arm again, this time, hitting the ribcage, but not much happened, there was definitely some knockback from the hit though, because he was moved a little to the left upon contact. I started to lose my patients and I swung my arm at him. It hit, but the power of the hit released Barry from the vines. Barry started swinging his arms and firing multiple crystal disks at me. I used my flail to deflect them, but then a shard like crystal cut through some of the connecting vines. I screamed in pain and fell to the floor, clutching my right arm, which had my flail, in my left.
keep in mind, this is very different to akame ga kill, but notice how i had written that. small details are often very important. like if a crack appears in a dam, it can end with a city being destroyed. small detail : MASSIVE RESULT.

akame x tatsumi

Lubbock x najenda

TatsumixAkame all the way
Good start

Tatsumi x sayo