Reviews for The Father Pt 3
Bleu Tsuki chapter 1 . 6/24
Awwwwww! I loved that Hei was starting to grow on Kirihara! He’s still trying to “figure” Hei out, trying to catch him acting and all, but it isn’t going to happen because Hei’s the real deal! Hei talking to dolls is like snow white talking to animals :) He just has such an affinity for them. I hope Kirihara eventually comes over to team Hei...but I’m enjoying their journey so far!
TinglingSensationVII chapter 1 . 6/23
its been years since I last read a fanfic written by you-you're as good as always, keep it up!
Stuckathome chapter 1 . 6/9
Ugh thank you so much, this is the quarantine content we all needed ;_;
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8
I'm really liking how you are pacing the story. The dad is slowly evolving and changing his thinking. He's being pushed to challenge his thinking and it seems extremely human and realistic.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7
This one is really good
I like hei’s character and how vigilant Misaki’ father is around him
Cant’ wait for the next chapter
Verdantia chapter 1 . 6/5
Lovely! Such human interaction. (no level of irony intended.)
loremipsxm chapter 1 . 6/6
Ohohoho, wasn't expecting a story from Naoyasu's POV. I love getting stories from POVs that aren't as common. And I especially loved the little conversation Hei and he had at the restaurant where Hei asked Naoyasu why he joined the Syndicate, and Naoyasu confesses he doesn't know whether he still would have joined had he known their true intentions. I like how despite Naoyasu's hatred of contractors and his prejudice towards Hei (although- if you'd only seen his dossier and didn't even know he was technically human...can I blame him), he isn't a monster, and even he isn't comfortable outright saying that he'd knowingly abet genocide. But then again he didn't say he absolutely wouldn't.

And the little tease with Hei admitting he's not really a contractor, only to be interrupted! I hope Naoyasu gets the chance to find out what he meant...
LayLay lives chapter 1 . 6/6
Kirihara Naoyasu is a slow burn for trust. Hopefully he will see Hei for what he is and that is that he is a good man. Yes save the dolls!
Dear4Life chapter 1 . 6/6
LOved "Leave it to the Superintendent to win the son in law lottery" Kirihara's not thrilled.
Awesome he got to spend a little time with him to see how he is. Too bad he still thinks it's an act.
Thank you again.
jjjan1125 chapter 1 . 6/6
Hopefully they work things out at dinner
ELinkA chapter 1 . 6/6
Thank you so much!
Sinthija chapter 1 . 6/5
So awesome! It’s interesting getting the story from another perspective.
Fenguin chapter 1 . 6/5
Great chapter. Love your work as always! Everytime I finish reading anything you write, my mind just goes "aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh".