while your dedication of the system is commendable, for me it gets tidious. It feels like reading a game manual that you are just going to watch. I find a ratio of 80% story 20% system would be ideal. And the big info dump of all his powers get really confusing. Too many powers for my taste. I prefer a core power and specializations from that core power and building from it feels more satisfying for me as progression of power feels more natural

fucking shit

Love your story, please keep it up!

Plz update I'm cryingg :''''''''( doesn't have to be a chapter just an update onnwhy it's taking so long

You fucking bastard, you haven't updated in over a month :'(

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

I love this story so far, not sure about all the sacred gears and how that’s going to be explained but hey this story is incredible so far so I am excited to find out.

Can you just gloss over the constant grinding and wall of text stat pages and get the plot moving, this is getting rather boring.

You have made too many game screens I'm just skipping them but there are too many!

(I already posted this review but this website is buggy so Im going to post this again)

Thanks for the chapter, im super excited to see where you go with this. Im also really happy with this new "gamer" system that you created, ive read plenty of gamer stories and something like that truly makes your story stand out.
One thing I hope you avoid is the MC being too OP. Some people go way too fast too quickly and they dont know what to do next because their character could sneeze a planet away. It's an easy trap to fall into, just remember adversity and true danger keeps a story interesting. Both for the audience and writer. Just look at Dark Wolf Shiro's work as an example of that. But most of all, as long as you have fun with your novel the audience including myself can go suck a dick hahaha.
Im truly looking forward to more of your novel.
Im sorry if you dont appreciate this long ass comment but meh, if it inspires you to write then thats good enough for me.

P.S: Btw, are you planning in give the MC an stand? If yes, pls give to him killer queen, I havent seen anyone using stands in a gamer fic and the idea of the MC standing against all the khaos brigade and yelling bites za daust gives me chills.

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

too much info dump.

If issei does want a girl he should go after the low hanging fruit called aika kiruyuu

Great story and concept but seriously don't me issei join Rias' peerage. For one with five sacred gears three of which are Longinus' it is feasilby impossible for him to be reincarnated especially if he's a Great One, and also it's just way to over done. If you want him to help them that's fine but just don't make him get reincarnated and always bend over for everyone especially if he gets op. Just my personal input so you do you I guess man.

I want to know who is Issei's harem. Is that the same as canon? Also is there a lemon?