Reviews for Cycle of Change - A Frozen AU (Book 1) |
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laxwriter chapter 9 . 7/24 I know you've written a bunch more stories in this universe, but i ask that you go back and reread and correct your story. I love the ideas, which is why I kept reading, but. Your thoughts are all over the place, you contradict yourself often, making it hard to know what parts are still true and what you changes. Prehapes get a beta's help. Just some ideas to make your stories easier to follow and even better than they already are. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14 I can't stand the 5th chapter. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14 Dispute's the worst, most insufferable, most unforgivable 5th chapter because of the sister drama. |