Reviews for A Second Chance
TBossK chapter 10 . 7/19
Loved this chapter. It’s at the point now where the story is only getting better and better. I myself am happy that the narrative is more focused on Bulla, hopefully that doesn’t turn others off.

Again, I’m intrigued by the way you’re writing Bulla’s character. It’s so different from how I would imagine, but it’s understandable considering what she went through.

I lived for the interactions, that’s what I’m here for. I’m sure she’ll be great friends with all the girls in her class, but I’m curious to see if her relationship is better with some than others. Momo seems to be a possibility.

Also, yes! At the top where she belongs! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
LadosKurayami chapter 9 . 7/19
That certainly was an interesting read so far. While those type of stories aren't usually my type there is certainly promise and potential in it. What I notice is that it's rather fast-paced, it might help the story if you take it a bit slower maybe, get into bit more details in certain scenes, like the important ones.
What I'm curious about to see is how you'll handle the power gap between Pan and Bulla compared to the rest of that of the people from the MHA universe, the ones in Dragon Ball are simply beyond anything of their comprehension. I'll look forward to see more of it and how it will progess. Good luck in the future with it.
TBossK chapter 9 . 7/19
This was definitely my favorite chapter by far, for obvious reasons lol. I’m so excited to get into these interactions between Bulla and the rest of class 1A. I can’t wait to see what you do, but I’m sure I’ll love it.

I also really liked the spar between Bulla and Pan, very well written.

Can’t wait for the next chapter :)
diabloseriosa chapter 9 . 7/18
kind of weird, trunk vegeta and bulma is kind of asshole if i remember corectly, she shouldnt have a problem with confrontional person nor lable them as mean in first impression
Anon chapter 8 . 7/11
I really like this story! Normally when there's a crossover between dragon ball and my hero academia it has Gohan, so its nice to see Pan and Bulla doing the crossing over instead. Can't wait to see them interact with 1A.
Anon chapter 8 . 7/10
Just found this story and I'm already hooked! Most of the time when these two series cross over its with Gohan, so I'm glad to see Pan and Bra here. Can't wait to see the girls interact with 1A.
TBossK chapter 8 . 7/6
Awesome chapter! I loved seeing each girl go through the entrance exam. Love the Pan and Inasa interaction. Also loved the cameos from Todoroki, Kirishima, chick who controls vines from class 1B, did I miss anyone else?

I love how you’re writing Bulla. I’m more invested in her than Pan, but I’m biased lol. I love Pan too tho.
TBossK chapter 7 . 6/28
Love this chapter! First off, I loved the way you dragged Shaigaraki. Middle aged and crusty lips lol.

I’m really interested in your portrayal of Bulla, again it’s different than how I’ve seen her frequently written. I’m glad she got the spotlight for this one and got to show off some ability.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.
diabloseriosa chapter 7 . 6/28
glad your continue the story, pan and bulla path already diverge it look like
sandy alice chapter 6 . 6/18
I love your story I look forward to the contiii
what a sad start poor bread and bra ...
Although it is very soon I would like to see the reaction when the boys and teachers of class A1 find out ... about their past ... I am going to cry ...
I had to use a translator for that hehehe ...
TBossK chapter 6 . 6/18
Emotional chapter, that’s for sure. I hate that Bulla is struggling so much, but it’s understandable. These people better start cutting her some serious slack.
Brandon James chapter 6 . 6/17
I see, so what you meant by Non GT Iterations was that this isn't the Pan that traveled with Goku in GT. I assume that you are indicating from chapter 5 that Pan knows how to fly and not use ki blasts, and bulla is vice versa.
This chapter also establishes that your versions of Pan and Bulla are around the strength of the 8% Midoriya we've seen in season 4.
It's admirable that you're sacrificing any form of author notes in order to keep the tone of the story!
SuperSaiyajin4Vegeta chapter 6 . 6/17
He can see into the future all he wants, Pan is WAY too fast for him. She should have gotten that stamp easily.
diabloseriosa chapter 5 . 6/17
great chapter, you flesh out the chracter quite well, building motivasion at the bigining of story quite important after all, will bulla has bulma teknology capabilities though?
dmandog056 chapter 3 . 6/16
Alright this is interesting, but I recommend a word count increase to either 2500 or 5000 words. The chapters are just WAY TOO SHORT, there's a lack of meat to the story.
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