can you reduce the naivety and the self-righteousness of the naruto heroes. make it more realistic as the narrator is more focused on finding a way back to his world. even in the movie roat to ninja. Naruto prefers looking for a way home rather than meddling in other people's business.

Awesome chapter keep it up

Hahaha fascist ninja Group xD

how do Naruto fans find such cliche, blank and unimaginative stories? I'm wondering?

Like I promised on Shinobi at Sea, here my comment. Please do not take it bad, it's mainly influenced by the fact I dislike Rias and Akeno, it has nothing to do with you. If you like them, it's only bad luck for me, nothing more.

I like the beginning, but since I do not like – read hate – Rias and Akeno, I'm a little put off. To be precised, I'm really happy Naruto doesn't trust Rias and do not like her – his reasons for that are a part of mine –, but I'm also annoyed she will still become a member.

As for Akeno, I'm sad you chose her to become his friend. Kiba I noticed is often put in the background in a lot of fics. I would have prefered him trying to befriend Naruto, them being the only decent males of the school and all. Of course I know Kiba is DxD version of Sasuke, an avenger, but contrarily to him he still knows how to smile and talk to people. It would have done him good I think.

Finally, I'm somewhat miffed Naruto prevented Raynare plan of killing Issei. Of course, I don't want Issei to become a devil and serve under Rias, I'd prefer him to master his powers as a human, or as a dragon if he ends up becoming more dragon than human. But the reason I'm not pleased is because I wanted Naruto to witness how Rias voluntarily let Issei get killed to transform him in dragon forcefully, without letting him the choice, supposedly to save him and play as his benefactor so he owns her, respect her and serve her. That way, Naruto's current opinion of Rias would have become definitive.

Naruto spying Issei and Yuuma's date would have seen Issei get the magic circle. Then he would have had one of his clones transform as Issei and play dead and invoke Rias and see what she was up to and then he would have hated her.

But heh, I don't have the impression it will play like that or similarly.

I really like this story can't wait for you to continue thank you.

Buen capitulo bro valio la pena la espera buen trabajo continua pronto con el sig capitulo

I look forward to the update

Nice chapter

Good update.

I'd like Rossweiss to be in Naruto's harem if possible

this is a good story but I'm still saying it's beyond absolutely retarded to pair Naruto with an emotionless genderless shapeshifting dragon god and an angel that is incapable of being in a relationship let alone a polyamorous relationship without falling

this is very good i hope you keep updating this story

why for the love of all that's good, or shitty or anything else do so many fucking idiots decide that not only must Ophis absolutely have to be with Naruto but so should Gabriel which is just fucking retardedly stupid since she's you know an ANGEL and not just any angel she's a fucking SERAPH so being in a relationship especially one which includes multiple women would cause her to become a fallen. As for Ophis it has no fucking gender it's a shape shifting dragon that's been around since pretty much the beginning of time

nice chapter, I like the change about Raynare and not to aggressive (tear-off her Wings etc.) shame Raynare is not a harem member, but I'm curious Sona loves her Sister, but sharing a harem?

and is Gabriel even possible? or Ophis is as dragon god OP in DxD (and I don't know why, but my brain change her image with Nemesis form to love ru)