Interesting take, the self editing of everyone’s cursing is a little annoying and the way Ruby is towards dating and PDA seems like someone younger than 15, but other than that it’s all pretty good. Secret family connections are kinda fun sometimes.

Sensational as usual!

Thank you for the sugary sweet intake!

Yang is best sister, as much fun as the funny reaction would have been the sweet supportive one is nice too. It looks like Weiss will be the conflict from what you're hinting at so far anyway, gotta have some somewhere!

Blake and Ren know! The ninjas always know, good on em for their discretion.

Ahhh adorable trio interactions are like a balm for my soul. The fact that Ruby is so unbearable adorable definitely helps with that too. Also I know this is a while away, but I really can't wait to see how yang reacts to this pairing.

Awww this is adorable, Ruby is as sweet as always I can see that Pyrrha seems to be the one with her eye on both prizes and I hope Jaune gets his confidence together. Poor bastard gets the short end of a lot of sticks lol

Are Jaune and Pyrrha crushing on Ruby? Now that's cool.

Gee, I can't think of any reason why "Vale used to be run by Faunus" would result in a banning in Vale.

I really like this story
The interactions are cute and the team actually realise they'll need help to stop a global terrorist organisation.
This is turning out better than Canon volume 2 (especially with no cringey Jaune/Weiss subplot and the team making an effort to think things through)

Kind of sounds like Ruby needs to get some more information on her mom's semblance.

Hmmmmm... Adam vs Ruby confirmed?

Hopefully with Ren and Nora there Blake/Sun won't end up leading a warmachine onto a busy highway this time

There we go! And, i'm still semi worried.

Yeah, I like how the teams are comprised and switched up. All the set-up was nice but now it’s tome to see it through. You had it basically word for word when Neptune and Sun show up. I always enjoy those moments.

OMGGGG the Yang teasing, though! I mean, I was ready for it, but, like, not really. I figured it be one of those “blow over” moments where things aren’t really touched on, but it was sooooooo cute and genuine. Genuine interaction makes things so much more believable.

I wasn’t sure how things would work but you’ve created a little pocket universe within the story where this blends so nicely. Already awaiting chapter 9!
Also, the “we’ll never leave her” comment punched me in the first thank you very much!

- R G