Reviews for Rise of the Great Demon
Michael Weyer chapter 19 . 9h
Ah, Deadpool, always...well, fun is a relative term with him...
Cer1992 chapter 19 . 13h
Nice chapter. Looking forward to the Deadpool story as well as the Lex/Doom team-up whenever you get to them. Speaking of Deadpool, imagine the Arrowverse and MCU characters learning from him what their lives are like in canon (i.e. Thor finding out about you-know-what and Tony and Nat reacting to their deaths, no need to get started on the canonical Arrowverse stuff).
Chaos Sorcerer chapter 19 . 19h
FFUUUUUUUCCCKKKK! Doom and Lex, sweet Jesus of mother fucking Christmas! I was nervous about Lex, even more so with Doom, but both of them?! Lex better be careful though, Dr Doom is in another league compared to him (the live-action versions of the character though, not so much). This guy is a master of science and magic, an equal to Mr Fantastic in intellect and once considered Dr Strange’s replacement for Sorcerer Supreme. He learned from Morgan Le Fay herself, and once time travelled to the past, surviving there for years, even killing a lion with one punch! That’s not all! He once sacrificed the woman he loved to gain a magical armor made from her skin!…hardcore but gross and kinda disturbing. Now I’m on to the big one, Doom, when the Marvel multiverse was collapsing, gained the powers of the Beyonders and became God! He salvaged what was left to create Battleworld, turned Johnny into the sun, killed Dr Strange easily, took down Cyclops who was the host of the Phoenix Force, had an entire army of Thors at his disposal and ripped out Thanos’ fucking skeleton! Probably loads more feats but those are what I remember. But then, when it was all over and Doom reflected his time as God, “I found it…beneath me.” Gather as many Luthors as you want, but Dr Doom is a cut above them all. If he knows about his past council of Luthors, and chances are he does since he’s Doom, he’ll mock Lex for his utter and destructive failure and lack of foresight working with DCEU Eisenberg, and generally believe Lex is beneath him. Ooooh! I want to see that now, Steve and his band of Wonder Women (would Donna be a part of it too since she’s a Wonder or is it only Dianas?). Yep, Legends should go to Jotunheim and pray that they can recover, or maybe actually go there and fight the Frost Giants and lose their ship thus ending their time traveling screw ups-I mean…no, I do mean screw ups.

Is New Asgard going to be like the one in ‘Endgame’ or will it be more advanced? Like the floating city of Asgardia, Thor’s got the Odinpower (which he used to make the city float before in the comics), Loki has his magic, they’re friends with the greatest minds on Earth, the Asgardians themselves were advanced with magic and tech, and they have the Space Stone. So the boxes that Strange gave them we’re sort of similar to the Horn of Cathbhadh from ‘Merlin’? Could’ve been a form of Druid magic he was using then. What other multiversal threat is Doom talking about? Are they referring to Dormammu? Or the Anti-Monitor? Joker Bat wouldn’t know about that one though. So is Mordo now just a ghost stuck on Vormir? No hope of returning if his body was destroyed, unless someone with immense power does something, or he tries to possess someone else.

A new guardian of the Soul Stone so soon after the last was appointed, and now Adam Warlock has bonded with the Stone. I pity the fool who gets in his way. Ah! So you used my name suggestion for Merlin, thought you’d forget about that. Colin Morgan is actually Irish, well, Northern Irish. Arthur Pendragon is now Brian Braddock? Well, didn’t see that coming, but it certainly fits, and now he’s got an alias. How long it’ll take for Arthur to get used to the new identity is another matter. Initially was a bit confused when Gwen was with Arthur and Merlin before I realized it was Guinevere. Maybe refer for to her with her full name while Spider-Woman is Gwen. Guinevere’s new name could’ve been Gwen Smith (Smith from blacksmith, like what her father use to be), though I suppose it’s going to be Gwen Braddock now, that also begs the question if they’ll marry each other again in modern times. Merlin could fire back that Arthur is more his sidekick, and he is more powerful. While it’s true that the Shazam version of Captain Marvel came out before Marvels Mar-Vell (1967), that was when the character was part of Fawcett comics (appearing from 1939-1953). It wouldn’t become a part of DC until 1972. On that note, I really hope we get to see the actual Captain Marvel of Marvel. Since Gah Lak Tus came from universe-10005, and that version is actually a whole bunch of drones made by the Kree, the Kree race exists there and so could Mar-Vell. Now, in an attempt to end hostilities between myself and Freddy Kruegar’s ugly sister, may I offer a hand to welcome to the story, “Deadpoooooooooolll!” Should get him to sing the rest of the song from the game. Still, the bastard better watch himself, the Irish are able to bury the hatchet but we don’t forget where it’s fecking buried either. Anyway, would’ve figured it was Wade who was NoobMaster69 all along. What I hope to see is Cable coming to retrieve his device and the red condom suited testicle with teeth himself, Thanos’ voice with a Winter Soldier arm, everyone’s reactions should be interesting. My guess on that ‘LotR’ character who will be in “the Marvelous Adventures of Deadpool! With a talking rock and a weird bug thing” is Tom Bombadil. Only in the books as far as I know and apparently the One Ring had no effect on him. I think I actually asked you before who and what was he. Taking a break from ‘Heroes’ then? Been ages since you did anything else, probably going to feel weird reading anything else now. Oh well, it’s not like it’s a bad thing, got plenty to look forward to, your one-shots, part four of ‘Thunder and Steel’, the ‘a Beautiful Journey’ sequel and the next part of ‘the Devil and the Archer’ (still holding on to see that idea of Matt and Oliver of that series dropping into season 6 of ‘Arrow’). Loads to see and enjoy. Stay safe y’all. Take care now, bye bye then.
Razy Riddle chapter 19 . 7/27
Deadpool...? Him...? Well I'll be hearing his chartering mouth again...!
Stand with Ward and Queen chapter 19 . 7/27
Good ending.

So Lex and Doom are teaming up. This should be good.

Ah, Arthur and Merlin's banter never gets old.

Deadpool...eh.

Looking forward to the one shots.

As wel las the next installment of the series, whenever you get to t.
Arrowverse Fan 217 chapter 19 . 7/27
Amazing chapter.

I understand and take your time.

Deadpool? I am so glad he has finally entered this verse.

Now all you have to do is have Luis from Ant Man join them and you've got a complete set.

Can't wait for the next story.
adam199118 chapter 18 . 7/27
Another wonderful chapter. After a multiverse ending battle, a party is the right thing to have. Honestly, from Titans, when Dick said Fuck Batman, I knew the show set itself apart. I am sure everyone finds it wierd interacting with their doppelgangers from other universes, but that is all part of the fun. It is good to see the other Earths' and the heroes, especially Peter find closure and live out some good times, espcially on Middle Earth Keep up the phenomenal work brother Elessar.
Bl4ckHunter chapter 19 . 7/27
Nice ending.

Arthur is now Captain Britain, nice. The banter betweem him and Merlin is always fun.

Doom and Lex? Interesting.

Adam has the Soul Stone now, interesting.

The Deadpool cameo was hilarious. * chuckles *

I look forward to a sequel. Until next time.
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 19 . 7/27
Arthur Pendragon is now Brian Braddock aka Captain Britain. Nice. But where does that leave Elizabeth "Betsy" Braddock aka Psylocke? Smallville Lex Luthor has made an alliance with Victor Von Doom aka Doom, the ruler of Latveria and the Arch Nemesis of the Fantastic Four. And finally, the character we've waited for to make his inevitable debut, the Merc with the Mouth, it's DEADPOOL, EVERYBODY! Hi, Deadpool. Big fan of yours.
adam199118 chapter 19 . 7/27
Ah man, this is phenomenal. Captain Britain is amazing. And now Deadpool making his appearance, just what we need. Doctor Doom and Lex Luthor, this is great. If Lex thinks he can screw over Doom, oh he has another thing coming. I can't wait to read your next story. We salute you, you lovely human being. Stay safe brother Elessar.
Flashraven chapter 19 . 7/27
Oh no, not the absolute master of comedy style humour bringing Deadpool again, LOL LOL LOL. Man I totally did NOT see that coming at all, Aragorn dear brother. What's brought it on, another stupid Guest pervert who's been takin' the shit outta ya, lol again, or were ya just in the mood for it on a general note? Either way, I had a great laugh at it, was playing the Doctor Who music piece Lithuania (that is of course played in Planet of the Dead when the lovely Lady Christina makes her escape from the cops onboard the 200 Victoria) throughout it all, and I sure can't wait for when the next awesome and as amazing as only the King knows how to deliver sequel addition to this number one in all high level number ones series gets delivered.

As to the other three parts... woohoohoo, Doctor Victor Von Doom, the tyrannical ruler of Latveria, is here now, and has teamed up with Lex Luthor (Smallville's version, isn't it, if I'm correct?). Just four words to this: NOT...GOOD...AT ALL. Boy, just wait till our multiversal heroes find out about this.

Aha, I guess that answers the Brian Braddock question to me- the famous, now of course former, King of Camelot Arthur has now assumed the name for himself as part of his new identity in the world. Boy am I so glad you've gone down this path for Captain Britain, brother, and it totally makes all the sense in the world.

And lastly, hoohoo, so now the man who I'm personally responsible for making the existence of possible in your universe, haha there, thanks both to your permission and 'All This for a Jacket', Adam Warlock himself of course, has now taken up the Soul Stone. Well, all I can say is, well done with how it was done so, bro, once again you prove your worth.

So once again, thank you so much for giving us such an amazing addition to your unparalleled anywhere else on this site series, your Royal Highness and our great King brother, and whenever you decide on starting the next one, we'll be waiting and ready to pounce when it does, haha. In the meantime, I wonder what great proper stories or one-shots we'll expect from you soon. Guess all I'll say is... I await to find out in good time
Gg chapter 18 . 7/26
Is auther becoming captain britan
Flashraven chapter 18 . 7/26
Holy Mother Enjoyable Of All Parties, Aragorn dear brother. Cos man alive was that party absolutely as best and as one hundred percent expertly done as only a certain young Indian king, the King of the Fanfiction at that, knows just how to present it, certainly the interactions between all the various sorts of doppelgangers from whichever Earth were absolutely top of the range first class hilarious, certainly the ones which got me laughing more than the rest were when a muddled up Scott mistook Tauriel and Earth 96 Clark Kent/Kingdom Come Superman for Hope and Ray Palmer, and Earth 66 Batman and Robin had to once again put the young Titans in place with their language use- man those two are one of my absolute favourite Dynamic Duo versions now, which is why I feel like say that when we come to your future version of COIE, which I have no doubt whatsoever you'll do such an amazing and mind blowing job at, I hope that their Earth itself is NOT destroyed, I love them too much now. And of course, the bit with Mr Mickey Boy Rorius was just as majorly hilarious, so was Carol and Shazam's one too I'd say, and so was also the hint of our future Captain Britain by Arthur- on ya bike I'm afraid, Brian Braddock, the old King of Camelot is set to take your mantle, lol- and his and Merlin's tease to one another over it, hahaha.

Sure loved dears Tony and Pepper's moment together afterwards, and her having the more free chance to solidly confirm her pregnancy to him, so touching that one was.

But man, just as Bl4ckHunter, our good friend Gabriel/Arrowverse Fan 217 and Mr Mischief and Chaos creating Magic Man Sorcerer have all said so big in levels themselves, were the brief reunions dearest as ever Stephen Strange allowed Frodo, MCU Peter and Arrowverse Barry to have with their deceased family members go right down to your hearts, man would I ever imagine I'd be touched so much for the second time this weekend, first time was last night my time when I saw a YouTube clip from 'Crikey! It's the Irwins' of when Bindi Irwin, dear daughter of the always forever in our hearts Crocodile Hunter star Steve Irwin, married her man Chandler Powell at Australia Zoo with her just as much dear mum and brother Terri and Robert and best mate to Steve Wes Mannion in attendance at the occasion, that girl totally deserved every single second of it and we all know that dad Steve was looking down from the heavens that day with the most proudest face in the universe knowing that his daughter's journey had come full circle. Did you do an absolutely spot on as could ever be said in the way of spot on beautiful and sheer perfect unparalleled job with all of that, our great brother.

And finally, woohoohoo, now if ever was there was suitable a candidate to take Red Skull bastard Schmidt's as the eternal guardian of the Soul Stone on Valinor, then Karl Mordo is so that, with all that he's done in the past the monster totally deserves it. Well done indeed to our two Doctor Stranges and Fate and Wong for performing his banishment. But at the same time, the fucker does have a point- messing with time does have major consequences, and that'll so be learned in time.

Well, I don't think there's anything else to be said really, I've exhausted myself with everything I've already said, lol. So all I'll say to finish off is... let's hope that mid-credits chapter is so soon, our great brother, I'm sure I'm not the only one who's wishing that right now. Btw, saw your review to my new addition to YLLO, thanks so much as always for it, just one small mistake though, Mr Fake Mayor ain't dead yet, that'll happen next time, but I'll forgive ya. And I see you're just as sneaky as young Gwen then, with your note on the secret drinks thing, haha
Spiritree0513 chapter 18 . 7/25
I re-read all the stories and I still cannot find where spiderman and wanda started dating.
Stand with Ward and Queen chapter 18 . 7/25
Good chapter.

Loved all the little references to the doppelgangers. Poor Hope. *Chuckles*

Mick begging to stay had me laughing.

Great gift from Strange. Poor Barry, Parker and Frodo.

Looking forward to next chapter.
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