Reviews for Tomorrow, Before Yesterday Begins
Bella-swan11 chapter 6 . 8h
Roger you do the right thing about Luffy, he knows your son Ace has now given you good advice; You must prepare for Garp's arrival. You need to find a way to send a message to Raeligh or Shanks, it is time to gather your old crew you will not give up on your illness; you are going to find the cure because you want to be part of your son's life and be a father to him.
G1ntsuk1 chapter 6 . 12h
Yesss~ I love it!
Can't wait for the Garp/Roger reunion :)
Greetings
G1ntsuk1
WhiteyWolf26 chapter 6 . 20h
Lol, may the pestering begin, indeed!
And all the while, a storm brews in the form of a worried granfather, steadily heading towards Dawn Island... that's gonna be one hell of a meeting. ;D
Roger'll never give up on being around Ace, so he'll really have to lay low from now on, though.
Telemna Hyelle chapter 6 . 7/23
I love this story! Your characterization is on-point.
Also, "it's good for my stomach" is now gonna be my forever excuse any time I want a snack.
SoccerSarah01 chapter 6 . 7/23
Oh gosh, Garp's gonna lose his shit when he sees Roger...it's gonna be great! I love how Luffy interacts with Roger and how Roger sees how Luffy is special in him, and I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Bella-swan11 chapter 5 . 7/19
I know you want your brother Ace to be happy, so go talk to Roger because he let himself be killed and let Ace grow up alone; You need to know to confirm that he is a good man. Because if he did it because he had no choice, it means that he loves his son and Ace deserves to know the love of a father; then you as his brother will help him to reconcile.
G1ntsuk1 chapter 5 . 7/17
Hi :)
These chapters just keep getting better and better! I just love how you portray Roger and can't wait to find out how this will continue :)
Greetings
G1ntsuk1
SoccerSarah01 chapter 5 . 7/17
Aw poor Luffy he really doesn't understand but I'm excited to see what happens next with Ace and Roger! This was such a great chapter, thank you so much for sharing this with us!
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 5 . 7/17
Glad to see he's still having fun.
Natsuyuuki chapter 5 . 7/17
Thanks for update
WhiteyWolf26 chapter 5 . 7/17
Lol, that was a funny chapter! xD Also a bit sad at the beginning, but what else could we have expected?
I think you portray both the ASL and Roger well, they seem in character to me so far. I can't wait to see Roger attempting to win Ace over! It will be slow going, but a good first step was made by saving them. And since Luffy's also determined to see Ace and Roger reconciled... sorry, not sorry Ace, but you'll end up with a dad by blood some day even before you set sail. ;)
G1ntsuk1 chapter 4 . 7/17
Hey there :)
I love it! Poor Ace and Roger... I just wish Rouge could have come back as well!
Greetings
G1ntsuk1
Bella-swan11 chapter 4 . 7/10
Roger you have to accept things have changed, if you want to protect your son you must regain your power as a pirate king; You can only protect him because you are not going to leave him is your son, you are going to act like Ace's father. Roger you need to find Shanks or Raeligh it is time for your crew to gather, you are going to regain your title as king of the pirates and you will shake with fear the navy and the government; Because it was his fault Rouge died.
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 4 . 7/10
Truly for such an upbeat and goofy manga there is a ton of angst and suffering boiling underneath if you pick at the scabs. Hard to remember all that when they are doing the chopstick dance though.
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 3 . 7/10
Looking forward to how you tackle epic stache man going forward. Will he set out with his son? The inheritor of his Will? Or lurk on Dawn Island to jump Garp for old times sake?
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