Reviews for Bill of Wrongs
GFDPFan chapter 1 . 7/14
Uh, YES!?
This is Great!?
I love how you gave so many subtle hints that this is Danny Fenton but that the Twins are too caught up in their conspiracy to catch it! That was really clever with the nacho cheese and the glasses and- EVERYTHING!
Also, by the end of the chapter I can immediately tell that both Danny and the Twins are near the middle of their respective adventures!
Can't wait to read more!
-A_Fan
UltraPhantom chapter 1 . 6/29
Do more
KorevainsoLightshire chapter 1 . 6/24
Nice, this is hilarious. Misunderstands that aren't completely false, always great! Now when Danny thinks of his Phantom persona, when saying that not everyone likes him is he referring to other people from Amity or is he referring to himself, as in not liking his ghost half? I hope it's not the latter and that he's not against himself. If you do plan to have Danny eventually reveal his true identity, can you please not make it done by fighting the convenience store ghosts, that trope is really overdone. Also, what age is Danny? 'Cause in the show he's 14 and it doesn't seem like it was too long after Reign Storm that this happens, which would put him between Wendy's and the twin's ages. I wonder what real Bill's opinion on our favorite Halfa is.

Keep up the great work!
SkreeSkraa chapter 1 . 6/23
Wacky and fun... looking forward to the next part!
ShadowPillow chapter 1 . 6/23
This is awesome. This is like the best of both shows combined in 100% awkward but awesome shenanigans. Everyone is just so... themselves and it's super spazzy and great. Universe combo was also done without a hitch. I'm in admiration.