Reviews for Slices of Paradise
IGT chapter 1 . 7/17
Interesting this lemon has a better story, than other new fan fics
and for future chapter maybe Girls form filler, movie etc.
kenriot1214 chapter 1 . 6/28
Next time have her take it up the back
Batagor19 chapter 1 . 6/27
need more
Forbidden-000 chapter 1 . 6/25
Good chapter bro
keller.blair1 chapter 1 . 6/25
You could interconnect the chapters with this one it could be really fun
Rattletrap chapter 1 . 6/25
Absolutely loved it. If you ever plan on future chapters you could do like random snapshots of their previous encounters. Maybe even from pre shippuden. Cheers mate.
Raizhan chapter 1 . 6/25
Very interesting to read and the lemon scene seems pretty good in my opinion.
WindyCitySlayer1 chapter 1 . 6/24
Awesome story
Keep up the good work
Spacecore94 chapter 1 . 6/24
So I'm guessing that this is more than just a physical relationship? Cuz I feel the love in this
Dom2040 chapter 1 . 6/23
Interesting story!