Reviews for Slices of Paradise |
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IGT chapter 1 . 7/17 Interesting this lemon has a better story, than other new fan fics and for future chapter maybe Girls form filler, movie etc. |
kenriot1214 chapter 1 . 6/28 Next time have her take it up the back |
Batagor19 chapter 1 . 6/27 need more |
Forbidden-000 chapter 1 . 6/25 Good chapter bro |
keller.blair1 chapter 1 . 6/25 You could interconnect the chapters with this one it could be really fun |
Rattletrap chapter 1 . 6/25 Absolutely loved it. If you ever plan on future chapters you could do like random snapshots of their previous encounters. Maybe even from pre shippuden. Cheers mate. |
Raizhan chapter 1 . 6/25 Very interesting to read and the lemon scene seems pretty good in my opinion. |
WindyCitySlayer1 chapter 1 . 6/24 Awesome story Keep up the good work |
Spacecore94 chapter 1 . 6/24 So I'm guessing that this is more than just a physical relationship? Cuz I feel the love in this |
Dom2040 chapter 1 . 6/23 Interesting story! |