Reviews for Nailing the Sword
Angeloux chapter 20 . 8/7
Good chapter! Love the character development. You're doing it really well!
xenahort x chapter 20 . 8/7
okay! what the heck man?

i thinked they would avoid Dinah kipnapping?
FerunaLutelou chapter 20 . 8/7
Yes, finally, some PHO action!
Anyway, nice chapter. Really liked the last part. Taylor just hanging out with Madison was nice. Would be cool to see her just hang out with the other Espada members one by one as well. Like, getting to know them, or something.
I cant wait for the others to catch up! Its cool to see Taylor in action, but it would also be great to see her act more like a leader more often.
Good luck with the next chapter!
RedBurningDragon chapter 20 . 8/7
Now the question is if Mads stopped Coil before it even began or if she was too late lol only time will tell
Creus chapter 1 . 8/3
Very interesting! You have my attention.
Add to Follow/Fav.
RedBurningDragon chapter 18 . 8/3
Maybe just work on a bean farm jack lol
FerunaLutelou chapter 19 . 8/3
Lisa the Hug Buddy. That's noice.

Its good to know that there is at least a chance Coil won't get Dinah and that her parents may not die.
FerunaLutelou chapter 18 . 8/2
Damn, this was hilarious!
xenahort x chapter 18 . 8/2
i bet this would happen if they fight
Shade669 chapter 18 . 8/2
What happened to Riley?
FerunaLutelou chapter 17 . 7/31
Vicky WAS being manipulative, both in canon and here, but (at least in canon) it wasnt because she was evil or something, and it wasnt her intention to manipulate Amy. No, it was because she was irresponsible, a little arrogant and unwise (she's not stupid, but she doesnt have much experience, so she makes bad choices). In her head its not manipulation, its an argument.

Im sure you've seen this sometimes in real life, popular people doing bad things unintentionally, getting away with it and not learning their lesson.

What Amy NEEDS to do here to help Vicky, not ruin her family's/organisation's reputation, uphold New Wave's principles and etc. is very simple. All she has to do is tell the rest of the New Wave, especially Carol, about the problem. Sure, its not gonna be a pleasant conversation, nor will its fallout be pleasant either, but it will be for the better.

Well, thats for what she should do. What she's gonna do I have no idea.

Anyway, really liked this chapter. The only questionable moments I could find were at the end of the chapter. Neither Amy nor Vicky called out Taylor for torturing a person. This is not something anyone is allowed to do. Another thing is that they were a bit too trusting when 2 unknowns said they are not villains, and they are not gonna tell on them for almost killing a criminal, or use that info later to blackmail them, especially now that they've seen them torture someone. And finally, Amy kinda didnt care about the info they got from that guy. Maybe that's what you were bothered by?
zigmas chapter 6 . 7/27
Still ain't gonna watch Bleach, but this is probably gonna be VERY FUN.
And I really hope it keeps updating as steadily as before, lol.
xenahort x chapter 16 . 7/27
hehehehe the empire will not know what it hit it!

maybe Taylor can get purity as one of her enforcers
Hitmen101 chapter 16 . 7/27
Thanks for the chapter. :D :)
RedBurningDragon chapter 16 . 7/27
Welcome to The Other Side lol
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