Reviews for White Lion
Klance4ever chapter 6 . 7/20
Really great story! I wish we'd have seen more conflict with Lance trying to figure out things with Alfor and how he was never there like he was for Allura, or maybe see his Mom and siblings reunite with him, but I enjoyed it a lot!
Shiranai Atsune chapter 6 . 7/21
Yey! Another new chapter to enjoy so soon!

The finale is here! And it's a whopping 11k words!

When did Lance go to Oriande?

Awww poor Keith, can't imagine what he had to go through with all that worrying.

Hm, so only Honerva died. ...I'm actually okay with that.

What's an ‘awDVaewr’?

Keith is so gonna lose that bet.

A proposal? Couldn't resist? I'm not complaining. I did like the outcome: "not yet".

Nice of that scene with Alfor and Lance. My heart broke a bit at his backstory.

But the end of that last line, I feel like Lance jinxed things.

This was a beautiful ending! I enjoyed reading this so much!

Even though this was only for a few chapters, I really am going to miss this.

Love this so much! Can't wait to read more of your fics in the future!
SomeStormLeaf chapter 6 . 7/20
Last chapter! Omg!
This was awesome! Lance and Keith are soooo cute and everything, adorable! And they all survived! Yayyyyyy! I love them all and this story and ending so MUCH!
Perfect story, sad it ended but so good! Thank u for this
SomeStormLeaf chapter 5 . 7/16
YAY KEITH AND LANCE FINALLY TOGETHHEEERRRR! As they're like the most adorable people , you write them so good together!
And all the fights, and Allura, and everything! So awesome! As long as Allura or Lance don't die...:(
Shiranai Atsune chapter 5 . 7/16
Yey! A new update! The moment I got the email alert, I just had to read this ASAP!

10k words! You write such long and good chapters, so fast!

What did Shiro talk to Keith about?

Yes indeed, it should be "Keith and Lance".

Oh yeah, should've known that with Lance being an Altean Prince, Keith would have to court him the Altean way.

Was the Unilu hitting on Lance? ...he doesn't know who the Black Paladin is? I'm guess he only had access to the Voltron show?

Hm, this would explain as to why Alfor was in a coma.

...Anakin, yes.

Loving the affectionate Klance even during the final battle.

Please do not sacrifice Allura, Alfor, and/or Lance!

Only one more chapter to go!
Shiranai Atsune chapter 4 . 7/13
Yey! A new update!

So long, so good, so worth the wait!

“Quantum Rift”? “Abyss”, you mean?

Keith saw some future Klance scenes, didn’t he?

“Sander”? You mean “Sanda”?

*Gasp* THAT KISS! SSSQQQQUUUUUEEEE!

OMGEE. THE REUNION WITH ALFOR!

Whoa, so close to the end already!
SomeStormLeaf chapter 4 . 7/13
This was an A-mazing chapter! Seriously, so awesome! Keith and Lance are so sweet! And Shiros new arm! And omg the way u describe the medical stuff, so good! It feels so real and actually the way it would be! Seriously it's so sweet!
I read so many fics with Altean Lance and him being Allurad sister but this one is actually the most realistic one!
Awesome chapter, I really loved it, u should be proud of yourself!
Shiranai Atsune chapter 3 . 7/8
Yey! A new update!

9k words! So long, so good!

I really thought this was gonna be "The Journey Home". Keith and Lance were just sent out to Space, did they go back to their Lions?

But yey, they made it back to Earth!

Alfor has to still be alive.

SSSQQQUUUUUEEEEE! KLANCE CUDDLES!~

Grrr, humans, so accurate...

Halfway there already!

This story is so good, going so well... please don't kill any of Lance and his family, not even Alfor.
SomeStormLeaf chapter 3 . 7/8
Go tell those weird humans, Lance! Nice!
I love how they think that in some reality they're in an actual TV show that was so funny.
And Keith and Lance- So SWEET! It's kinda awkward but super sweet at the same timw! Overload if adorableness.
And Allura Pidge and Lance working together is like the best, I love the three if them. And I love Alluras and Lance's relationship, it's so wholesome now!
And like how Lance and Allura are literally just walking around talking Altean- best.
Awesome chapter I really really liked it!
Shiranai Atsune chapter 2 . 7/5
Yey! A new update!

10k words! So long, so good, so worth the wait!

I'm touched Allura now has so many siblings, more family for her.

Hoping Alfor really is still alive on Earth somehow.

"pretty head" huh?

Black lurched to make a Klance moment.

What was Pidge about to say before Shiro interrupted?

Uh oh, Keith and Lance alone and floating in space? "The Journey Within" Klance Edition.
SomeStormLeaf chapter 2 . 7/5
Loved this chapter! But like
What an end! Nice!
Really like this story, and I would love to point out some stuff that I enjoyed or something, but I honestly can't decide lol
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Shiranai Atsune chapter 1 . 6/28
Oooohhh! Altean!Lance! Such a long first chapter! Awww, only six chapters? Well, I suppose if every chapter is gonna be this long.

Redoing seasons 7 and 8, eh? I have a feeling.

I was hoping he would get to go to Oriande...

I was NOT expecting that twist! How is that possible? Though I should've realized it with the tags, I was thinking a lost descendant from Allura's aunt or uncle.

Good thing he and Allura never got together. THAT would've been weird. Star Wars weird.

Didn't Allura get her looks from Melenor? How would Rachel get her spitting Allura image look from Alfor?

I love this so much! I look forward to reading more of this!
SomeStormLeaf chapter 1 . 6/28
Wow, this was AWESOME! Seriously so great, PLEASE continue! This is actually so good! I love this.