It's very good start, thank

Amazing story cant wait for more

hey, nice story! i'm enjoying it so far. also, i completely get you about the imprint thing my dude. the thing with being able to imprint on a child? that shit always had me fucked up. like, no? it's just something i like to pretend doesn't exist. and it wouldn't have been a problem if SM would have just allowed platonic imprints? like, think about it. the thing with the kid wouldn't have been a big deal, leah wouldn't have gotten fucked over (leah's my girl ok. she's perfect. no flaws), and it would have saved me a lot of gross feelings. i just...never know what to feel about the concept of imprints if no one has a choice! anyway, thanks for the update!

I agree with u
I don't feel it was right to put quil or jake with children howis that even right
I really hope you go more in depth about the. wolves and things for your story, and maybe make Clara older and sont have jake with nessie

Hi :) great start, can't wait to read more !
Thanks for sharing it with us

read both chapters back to back really loving this so far I hope new chapters come soon