Reviews for Funny how fate works eh?
legitreader123 chapter 4 . 7/21
nice.
merendinoemiliano chapter 4 . 7/20
Pretty nice chapter, extremely glad we'll have a Jaune already trained since too few reincarnated characters do something about him. Can't wait to see new battles and Ironwood 'S role, keep up the good work and see you soon.
legitreader123 chapter 3 . 7/13
"shot to the balls.
okay that was a dick move."
I see what you did there
SkyLime2212 chapter 3 . 7/10
this is great..
keep it up..
Dat-boi-waddup chapter 1 . 7/10
So this guy is the undisputed winner of no nut november and the guy who is still has no balls even if he's ballsy?HAHAHAHA
ExtraterrestrialFlyingCat chapter 1 . 7/10
hmmm a bit too fast paced, specially in the beginning it's fine for now but if this continue I'll drop this, why? it's because such fast paced would make it so that the readers will not be able to see the character development
rgoh266 chapter 3 . 7/9
So we gonna see iron daddy soonish? Also, I suppose with Emerald following Mercury instead of Cinder the entire Canon story is thrown out the window eh?
Lastly will we see him interact with team RWBY later in this story?
Keep up the good work I have high hope with ya on this!
merendinoemiliano chapter 3 . 7/9
Cool
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6
Boring
Car ride chapter 1 . 7/6
Interesting premise. My main critique would be the run on sentences. You need to add more periods.
Siradla chapter 2 . 7/7
Interesting, I shall follow this and see where this takes us.
If this is indeed Emerald...
Then you have saved someone who will follow you to hell and back...
Good luck, you'll need it.
uzzi455 chapter 2 . 7/6
I like this story it is veey good.
wanderingsurfer2210 chapter 2 . 7/6
emerald
merendinoemiliano chapter 2 . 7/6
Badass job trough fights may need to improve. Good work.
merendinoemiliano chapter 1 . 7/4
Interesting
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