Reviews for Fractured |
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Guest chapter 10 . 7/22 “We solved a murder?” “While nearing getting yourself killed in the process.” “That seems to be a common occurrence for me..” Me : * Laughing * Yes, Alex, very much. |
CF2 chapter 16 . 7/20 So,the final chapter. Yes,Lena and Brainy have a lot in common. Lena is right,Kara sees the best in everyone especially the people she cares about even if they lost their way for a bit. Kara is also right,she and their friends have forgiven them,now they need to forgive themselves. Yay to a game night. Great response from Alex to Lena & Brainy about them being invited. I hope Alex can convince Kara not to move to Argo. Very nice scene between Alex & Lena. Yes,Pete is a loose end. Kate better deal with her father for Jacobs sake. Great scene with Kelly. She's a great sounding board. Love how Alex texts and Supergirl flies in. Alex knows Kara. Glad Kara is opening up to J'onn. LOL to always beating Clark. J'onn is so right about Kara/Supergirl vs Clark/Superman. Nice callback to Myriad. Alex & Kara need this talk. Glad Alex told Kara about the diner. Also love how alike Kara is to Alex. Hurt your sister,make them So happy Kara is not going to Argo. Love this sister moment. Nice resolution with Pete. I like the idea of Kara trying to help him find his missing sister. Also nice twist that Pete figured out Kara is Supergirl. It shows he's a good P.I. LOL to him revealing all the ways he could tell who Kara is. Also he gave some good advice to Alex. I think Pete could be a ally to team Supergirl. Still laugh at him still billing them. Nice wrapup. This was a really great story. |
Fabery chapter 16 . 7/19 Happy you had Pete pointing out some of the terrible plot roles in this show. It reminded me of a fix where everyone on Catch did know but they went along with it because they loved Kara and found her excuses endearing |
LisaMT chapter 16 . 7/19 Ha ha! I loved Pete's speech at the end. |
SpencerFan chapter 16 . 7/19 Oh dark Alex I wish we had you on the show more. J'onn saying she should trust the team was great! By "back in the DEO days" Alex clearly means Monday because yeah she's an agent! Alex definitely has to thank Kara for some stuff because arguably without Kara and all she's brought to Alex's life Alex may not have come out because she wouldn't have met Maggie or a Maggie type or felt the support like Kara gave her to come out no matter who it was, yes Eliza was supportive would Alex have told her if she was stressed about being a perfect kid? Kara isn't totally wrong when she says Alex has more fun working with her because otherwise what would have happened - she'd probably spend her life in some lab never having the adventures she does so yeah while Kara arguably lead to the loss of Jeremiah she's also given Alex a lot too! Yes Pete tell Alex how trash that suit is - never wear it again Alex! Also ha to him calling out Kara some. :) "The end" for now. I look forward to the next story! |
Xio chapter 16 . 7/19 Excellent story. I love when you get a new story out and this one was great |
Phaerre chapter 16 . 7/19 Awesome! |
Jennifer Baratta chapter 16 . 7/19 Outstanding chapter and continue writing stories please |
LVEZ chapter 16 . 7/19 Very good ending did not like all the angst at the beginning. |
DtownGurl4488 chapter 16 . 7/19 Ummm what?! How is the longest chapter (I love it) the most incomplete one?! So are we supposed to guess who Pete is and believe that the sisters would just so casually be ok with him knowing? Like wtf? Also, do you have some grievances toward Argo? Lol. Cuz you tend to use it like a threat in your stories that needs to be stopped. Kara SHOULD be taking her ass home from time to time, to spend time w/ her mother, to reconnect w/ her culture and it's people and probably to keep learning past the level of a 13 year old. "Why is Jacob Kane still walking around as a freeman?" This was a LOADED question coming from Lena. |
HeroWitch chapter 16 . 7/19 So what to say about this story! Kara is home when Alex's here! Without here, she gone to Argo! Glad to J'onn, the voice to reason, nice good! Wonderful story, I liked it! Continue like this! You're my best author! |
dnmann chapter 15 . 7/18 Good chapter. |
SpencerFan chapter 15 . 7/18 "I am. I mean I didn't go and kill Jacob Kane did I?" - to her credit that is taking it VERY easy! Good conversations in this! "Final chapter up tomorrow" - we'll see. :) A nice update; I look forward to the next! |
Jennifer Baratta chapter 15 . 7/18 Outstanding chapter! |
CF2 chapter 15 . 7/18 Jacob does not know how lucky he is that Alex didn't go after him. Love that little bratty sister moment. Kelly definitely handled learning Kara's secret better than Lena. Kelly is a class act. Nice talk between Kelly & Kara and Kelly learning what happened with Lena learning the secret. Again,great scene. Very nice talk between Eliza & Alex. Great moment between Eliza & Kara. Very nice chapter. I'm curious about the next time Pete & Alex interact now. |