Reviews for Contracted Love Bond |
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![]() ![]() ![]() too much manufactured soul bond drama for me. It put me off continuing. |
![]() ![]() Good story. I wish you had kept Hannah alive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sirius is hte master of understatement when he said Hogwarts has been a bad experience for Harry and Susan. In canon it was pretty much a death trap for anyone not in Slytherin where they basically had free run to do whatever they wanted. I can see the muggleborns of Harry's time refusing to let their children go anywhere near Hogwarts when they get that dreaded letter. I don't think anything really changed after blood war 2.0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() May have been short but good none the less. Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Can't wait to see how they get justice for Hannah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve only read this one chapter so far and I already like it. Figured Harry would be a little more shy, also unsure how a breach of contract between two private parties can amount to emancipation, but I love you cheeky you have made Susan. She has fire in her and it is fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would say Hannah ends up dead would make Susan's actions easier to swallow, they were back in school and they were attacked. Its time for them to get the fuck out of Hogwarts, also they should bring up how is Hogwarts supposed to be the safest place when rape and attempted murder can happen so easily. Croaker needs to have Fudge taken out, and he and Amelia should talk about ending the DE's in Azkaban because if/when Voldermot gets back hes going to break them out. Better to do it now when they have time. |
![]() ![]() I am enjoying this. Save Hannah. She is essential to the group of friends. As for the story, burn the ministry? Lord Potter could be a hereditary title, also, the Potter family could be the first wizard in family. Bones could be the second wizard in family. Meaning, the two families are in essence the wizard if world of Britain. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soul healing on both Hannah and Nott. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fudge has too much power: it is not a dictature |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! But why kill off Hannah? What is going to happen now? |
![]() ![]() ![]() should let her die. great chance for more political struggles |
![]() ![]() ![]() couldn't the diary be pinned on Lucy |
![]() ![]() ![]() so every time they get dirty and busy the school will know about it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wasn't there a ministry ban on Dumbles teaching dada ? |