| Reviews for The Dark Phoenix |
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   jjiwon chapter 3 . 12h i reeally really love your story! though you keep repeating Harry/The Potter... and all the names too many time instead of using terms like He/Them/They etc... it's kind of annoying! Please update soon! 333 |
| EmpressErena chapter 3 . 15h I am HOOKED... Cant wait to see how well this is going to go! and btw you are an amazing author! |
| Apollanius chapter 3 . 7/22 Nice chapter though you switched cadmus and antioch. |
| Mark Sinfield chapter 3 . 7/22 Carn't wait for more |
| Joanm8128 chapter 2 . 7/15 Interesting story. I hope Dumbledore gets what is coming. |
| Apollanius chapter 1 . 7/14 like the u update soon |
| Linda chapter 1 . 7/9 Really like the story hope to read more soon. |
| belarokas chapter 1 . 7/10 I love the idea of Dumbledore being a dark wizard, but I think Harry shouldn’t be so powerful at age 3. But overall I find this story interesting so far. |
| anarion87 chapter 1 . 7/9 nice story so far |
| Sonia25 chapter 1 . 7/7 Don't give a damn what other says. I like powerful and baddass harry potter so I am glad this harry is gonna be powerful. Just don't make him heir of dozen of families i hate that part in any story. |
| Magnusss chapter 1 . 7/7 Fucking hell, you're falling into the Writer's Trap. From the start of the story, Harry is already OP, mastering Occlumency at the age of 3. He goes on owning a phoenix and all that shit. You know what makes a good storyline? Character arcs. To see characters develop over time. There is no development nor is there any potential, as Harry is given everything he wants and needs at the beginning. |
| wolf970 chapter 1 . 7/7 Nice start just don’t make him god by first year teach him weapons get him the sword be different |
| Sourav768728 chapter 1 . 7/7 thank you |
| draconic skysong chapter 1 . 7/7 so far, very nice start. I look forward to where this goes. |
| Mark Sinfield chapter 1 . 7/7 Please keep writing |
