| Reviews for The Chosen One |
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  Captaingoku vegeta chapter 3 . 7/18 Great story loving it pls write more,but it's a little short. |
| Random reader chapter 1 . 7/8 You dont need all the ellipse... only use it when you want a spoken sentence or thought is used. proper punctuation will really help the format and flow. |
 BattleHawk456 chapter 1 . 7/8 Noice good so far but it could be a little longer |
