Reviews for Totsuki's Legacy
Icombal23 chapter 6 . 7/22
Guys, if you are specting sorina don't read this fic cause is not about that. This fic is the classic custom character X Erina, so don't waste yout valuable time...
blueelias59 chapter 6 . 7/22
Pls do sorina
Icombal23 chapter 5 . 7/17
It's obvious this is not a sorina fanfic, so I'm not gonna keep reading this. Good luck..
Guest chapter 2 . 7/12
is this a sorina fiiiiic?
MauserTeleri chapter 3 . 7/13
Really enjoying the story and quick updates. You do a great job writing Erina's character and feelings. A bit concerned with how seemingly overpowered Haru is and what his role in the plot is. You hint at Erina needing to lose a shokugeki for some reason, but I don't see why a loss would help her. I think there needs to be more exposition on who Haru is or what his motives are. You can write existing characters in more brevity because readers can fill in the holes/imagine details since we know who they are. We're used to seeing Erina flustered or Alice teasing. OC's need a lot of detail behind them so we see them as actual characters not just Megumi's brother (who isn't similar to Megumi at all in personality) that is ridiculously skilled. Good luck with the next chapter!
Icombal23 chapter 3 . 7/13
Is this a sorina fic? If not, not gonna waste my time reading this...
R3bo chapter 2 . 7/12
Is it sorina or not?
If not then i'm not going to read any of that.
Australian Weeb chapter 2 . 7/11
Is this a Sorina pairing or Erina x OC story?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9
is this a soma x erina fanfiction?
Kano Otori chapter 1 . 7/9
I just realized how short this chapter is in comparison to others lmao.
Francesco Capogna chapter 1 . 7/9
Is this a sorina fic?