Reviews for Prodigal Son |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. I'm looking forward to more! I'd just like to note that the Pym Particle doesn't actually change the amount of material it affects, just the size and how it interacts with physics. (I'm not sure miniaturized plants could consume full-size molecular H2O, for example) |
![]() ![]() Captain America self insert a marvel fan ends up in the captain body with most of his memories and skills can he save the future! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too many gramtical error. You placed her for male character |
![]() ![]() Looking forward to when tony and pepper find out that tony has a son |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty good mentally for me, screw pym |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok. Great chapter, nice change of original by implementation of pym particles and showcasing S.T.A.R. labs which didn't exist in our dear original work. NOW you've made this YOUR story. Stay safe everyone! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like that he actually brings out the tech and advances the planet can we get interludes who, for example, give news talks about the publications? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep it up :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep it up :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying the little changes you've made to the original... can't wait for chapters 4-11! Take your time and stay safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have postedthe first chapter again |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to this, keep up the good work ! :) |