Reviews for The Witch and the Sorcerer
g77471164 chapter 2 . 1h
-And the faithful audience of ZeroSenpai cheer even high-

"MORE!-MORE!-MORE!-MORE!"

Love the story!
Thank you very much
May you have a great day
dipk chapter 2 . 8/3
this story is great, I hope you follow it, I never read a similar one
Naphtali0501 chapter 2 . 8/5
Poor Momonga. Even without Albedo, he can't escape the attention of a crazy yandere. At least she's nowhere near as powerful as Albedo to cause him trouble.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/3
Now this story really caught my eye! I hope there will be more and love your work bro!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/2
Satoru may be a little confused by how the economy of this world works, but luckily for him he has a little genius who's fallen in love with him to fill him in on certain things, and once he gets the hang of it, his gamer self should be able to handle the rest. That said he doesn't have any merchant levels or classes, so that's out, and him using (Charm) on customers probably isn't a good idea either., yet I suspect he has the right mindset for it, after all he's always obsessing over money in canon and complaining to himself that there's never enough.
Zennishi chapter 2 . 8/4
That's hot, a pity Momonga can't get a boner :P
On a side note though, he still has Wish Upon a Star, both skill and ring, so if he plays his cards right he won't even need Nazarick.
ParadoxTheory374 chapter 2 . 8/3
I really hope he has more confidence in himself, he has so much power but he's mind set is stilll stuck on being a salaryman. Also hope he refines he's current abilitys and learns more about the kingdom because he doesn't need any rest.

Thanks for the chapter appreciate it.
MSDeus chapter 2 . 8/2
Chaosconetic, I agree. Satoru is not the puppy type and will not admire Renner just like Climb as in canon. Also more like that Renner will admire Satoru instead of him admiring her. As she will likely try to make him look at her which we know it will never worked on him. Only if Renner shows her genius and talent that he will take interest on her seriously, but it will be very difficult as Satoru will likely become a famous magic caster before she even earned her Golden Princess title.

Also it is funny that Renner is the one who is acting like a puppy and trying to get her crush to look her more. Well Good Luck, trying to get his attention. I'll wait for your next update.
Chaosconetic chapter 2 . 8/2
A very unexpected yet very welcome story. It works on so many levels. Somehow the very idea of a young Renner getting attached to Satoru is just too good to ignore. I kind of like that Satoru is both detached in his dealings with others, he can feel vague pity, but not full on empathy, yet he tries to do good deeds when it isn't a detriment to him. Its a nice nod to his side story self where he was cold, but still did good things for Keno's sake, though he did do his dirtier deeds behind her back because she didn't like how he handled people who became a problem. Renner though is far less morally motivated than Keno, yet as with Climb, she perceives that ray of sunshine in her crush's good intentions.

I can't but wonder how she will develop with Satoru though since he isn't really the "Puppy" type the way Climb is, and its kind of hard imagining her thinking of Satoru as a puppy, so it may come down more to what she perceives herself to be to him, which means she'll have to finesse his thoughts about her out of him and then, in her twisted mind, much like with her smile, expand and evolve them into whatever it is she thinks he wants her to be, something that could work out quite comically perverse for us readers and quite uncomfortable for poor Satoru.

I wasn't aware Ainz had the ability to enchant things, at least without data crystals. Although he does have spells like create items or greater create items, but I'm not all that familiar with that aspect of the lore, and I suppose its not that important anyway.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1
I love the story. Its new and interesting. Please Keep updating
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1
Hey I loved this chapter! Keep up the good work man. I know that this is a side project so take your time and I look forward to reading more in the future. :)
FunkyMunky chapter 2 . 8/1
It's been a while since I read something good ever since God Rising. This is very interesting and I hope you write more.

My advice, don't over extend this story with so much chapters that you might get writers block or lose interest, so many stories get hiatus or forgotten in this thread. It would be better to write a concluded chapter, then write a sequel.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/1
Keep writing, please. Its good!
recordman chapter 2 . 8/2
There are a lot of words stuck together when there should be a space between them. The Extract of the White Root reminds me of the White Phial from Skyrim. I think the secret of Rayne being cured would still get out eventually. People will ask questions when the boy acts healthy. Satoru could meet with the Bareare family if his potion secret gets out. The ability to enchant powerful weapons and producing unheard of potions are powers of their own. The Kingdom might summon Satoru again, when he accidentally makes something surpassing the national treasures.
RyuujiVantek chapter 2 . 8/1
Hoooooo boy!
Shit is already hitting the fan and boy oh boy im as pissed as renner...
HOW DARE THAT NOBLE BITCH INSULTED OUR LORD AINZ?!
ANEJRKDKSKSNDKDLSKS!
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,phew... i lost my shit there.
Hope ainz does use his ainz name inthe future... and conquer the kingdom,!
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