I need more, more, more and more.

I feel like one aspect of fanfiction few people understand is it can be about ANYTHING within the chosen world, not neccesarily just the main characters. For example, of course there would be a supermax prision in the RWBY universe, we have examples in the form of Ren, Neo, Roman and several others that just being in highly stressful situations can both activate your aura and semblence. It makes sense that alot of those people would be either insane, vindictive, or outright greedy.

We also have proof that another person with an aura can activate the auras of others, this leads to another question, why dosen't every child at like age 8 have their auras unlocked? I've read fanfics where they actually give good reasons besides letting every child have superpowers being a bad idea.

I'm rambling, bottom line is that ideas like this that reach into the universe and tell stories that can totally happen within the blueprint of the world they take place in, but are largely separate from the plot always intrigue me.

Keep up the good work.

Amazing so far!
Can't wait for more!

Yes I love it need more already

Kung Fu Panda rope bridge fight

So bad ######

awesome

Love it keep up the great work. Please longer chapters :)

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need more

Really interested in seeing how this all plays out, the only thing to fix is that the name of the prison changed midway through the chapter from Zhu Zhan to Khu Khan.

Nicce

neat

Zeheer feel from Naruto there. And I have to say that Zeheer was a great villain for he believed in what he was doing was right and free the world for the need of an Avatar. Wonder what Naruto's goals are.

now that's how you start a story and I cant wait for what's to come keep up the great work

I like it

Really nice start although you spelt hagoromo's last name wrong it's spelt as Otsutsuki