Reviews for Youjo Senki : Optimus, The Chronicle of the Iron god
dropout-ninja chapter 3 . 7/24
Great job with all the dialogue- it really does add tension and weight to these interactions, kudos. Looking forward to the debut!
A reader chapter 2 . 7/23
I like it when Prime ends up in another world especially ones with outdated technology.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/23
Nice chapter
dropout-ninja chapter 2 . 7/21
The major’s POV is quite fun to see; you do a great job capturing Tanya’s internal narrative!
dropout-ninja chapter 1 . 7/20
Crossing these two over is a fascinating premise and I think there's a whole lot of potential here. I'm glad to get to beta such an engaging premise! This first chapter is quite attention grabbing
Thanks for sharing!