Hey there. I thought I would check and see how your writing has been doing. Looks like you got a decent amount of stories posted, a majority of which are focused on the Aegon character from Game of Thrones.

If I may be so bold, here’s some advice when it comes to posting. When you post rewritten work, don’t write that the story is rewritten or reposted in the title name and in the summary. When readers see that you are addressing that the story has been rewritten in the title and the summary, that will turn readers away since you are not selling the story to them. Or at least that takes away the selling point since that takes away some of the creativity.

Take in point the Spider-Man movies being remade. After the Sam Rami movies, they gave Spider-Man movie a different title rather than saying Spider-Man RESHOT. That would turn audiences away with that blatant statement. Don’t get me wrong, it’s great that you are putting extra focus on the story, we just need to work on that title and summary. Readers are drawn to a good title and a creative summary that summarizes the plot of the story. It’s better to address that the story has been rewritten in the author’s notes at the end of the chapter.

No just no friend dc really sigh man whatever I just know this story is going to be trash