Wow, this is really interesting, I'd love to see it continued! Cole is such a deep character, and he has so few fics about him, I'm glad to see new one!

Man, what did Jay say to get Cole so upset? ;w; I hope they make up in the end

One thing: I think it's spelle Y, with three L's instead of two. I could be wrong, but that's just what I saw on the Ninjago wiki page. Other than that, amazing job for your first story!

Can't wait to see what happens next, great job!

ps: When Cole said "don't cry, don't cry" all I could think of was the scene from Jumaji: Welcome to the Jungle XD