Reviews for Neo Team 7 |
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AttilaDaHutt chapter 1 . 7/25 I'm not really feeling your writing style. It's almost like a rough/rushed story telling from a third person POV. I feel like it needs more interchanging between dialogue and the third person POV, so the story is more fleshed out. I'll be following to see where story goes however. |
TheRockito21 chapter 1 . 7/21 Very good chapter! I can't wait for the chapter 2! |