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It was good but during the introduction to sandile you have a repeat sentence

can't wait for next chapter

Thanks for not doing Serena, she gets shipped with Ash too many times. I was gonna say something else but then I would’ve gotten a lot of hate.

Great chapter and sorry if I sounded impatient about the pairing I'm just grateful it's not Iris. Once again sorry for sounding impatient here is my updated suggestions of what pokemon Ash should obtain besides canon i this region. Deino, Golett, Zorua, Larvesta, Cubchoo, Bouffalaunt, Cryoganal, Mienfoo, Purrloin, Lillipup, Blitzle, Litwick, Pansage, Pansear, Venipede, and Druddigon. Keep up the great work.

Should have Ash catch Sandile sooner then in the anime

Nice update.

Interesting that Ash not only brings Pikachu, but also Quilava and Gible. Instead of Pidove, he catches Rufflet. Oshawott chooses Ash as his trainer.

Iris has a bit of both her game character and the anime.

Hilda will grow as a trainer and a good rival for Ash.

See u next time

good chapter.
Ask when ash will tell iris he met zekrom less than 5minutes after landing on unova.

Maybe Glalie Can teach Oshawott ice beam or icy wind

Nice work.

I’ve always found it interesting how different Iris is in the anime compared to her game self, in the game she’s cheerful, carefree and the champion of Unova despite being so young while in the anime she’s just Misty but even bitchier and a worse trainer. I’ve always wondered how things would change if iris was more like her game self, she would probably make Ash try harder seeing how good she is.

Rufflet is a best choice, the only thing bad that he evolves until the Level 54, and if Snivy appears, Ash will need use a female Pokémon.

Caitlin pokemon elite four of unova is a rare pairing

Great chapter!

Nice and I really enjoyed this chapter. When ash brought along two of his Pokémon I didn’t expect one of them to be quilava but I’m so glad you picked quilava and gible. Also thank you for making ash catch rufflet instead of Pidove because that damn bird was weak, it had trashy moves and it can’t even learn brave bird in the games. I’m also interested in Sandile because it was ash’s ace pokemon for the Unova region and let’s be honest he was carrying the entire team. I’m really excited where you are taking ash’s Unova team and which characters from the game will appear next. Oh yeah could you give ash a zorua I know ash will catch Sandile but ever since I saw the zoroak master of illusion movie I always wanted ash to catch a zorua. Can’t wait for next chapter and hope you update soon.