Hey! Soooo, yeah, loved the story. I like the way Chun Li is portrayed. She's my fav character by the way so, kudos on her , I hope you update soon...I was really gettin into it

him who?

*sigh* it pains me to review when this seems to have gone into fanfic wasteland like so many other good stories...but i was absolutely enthralled with this story, i loved the vega fight scene it was so...riveting. i hope to god you actually finish this one day!

Dammit, man, you should continue this. This is much too good to be left to die.

Amazing! You're writing style is so inspiring. I wish everyone wrote fics like you did. I hope you update because this story is amazing.

Man, your fanfics are god-like! Please update! D

update please

alright, i'm gonna give you a metaphorical kick in the arse and hope like hell that you post some more of this story.

it boils my blood when crappy fics go on and on for dozens of chapters then really good stuff like this dies after only a few.

yes i know it takes longer to write well, but please, for the sake of my sanity, either keep this story going or email me with what you planed to happen after this.

you've got me more interested then i've ever been in a piece of fanfiction, please keep it up.

That was so good, I hope you finish the next part of this chapter. Im anxious to find out what happened to ChunLi and Ryu after their fight with Vega. Keep going its soo great!

THAT was so good! There is no way you could ever make that better, its so wonderful! Well keep up the good work!

good story so far. keeps me intrigued. but would bison really care so much about a mere inspector to call his daughter and blah blah yaddi yadda? i dunno. seems just awfully a convenient way to have her traumatized. but update!

Wow! The detail in this so well written, its ... excruciatingly grotesque. If only someone had taken a picture of my face as I was reading it.
My only irk is that the running bit lasted a little too long. I'm too lazy to go back and make a clearer observation but I remember getting the feeling of repetetivity (is that even a word?) on more than one occasion.
Otherwise, well done.

You are a very talented writer. The imagery in this fic haunting and left me quite chilled to the bone. Well done, i can't wait to find out what happens next!

Wow. Excellent chapter, as usual. Very sad and full of an eery quality. I really wish I could write the way you do. Congrats on the amazing work so far! I look forward to more...

All right! You're back, and with a bang too! Extremely impressive chapter; freaky, atmospheric, and very touching.

The use of language was very good. One thing you might want to watch, though, is the length of the sentances; there were a couple pretty long ones, especially in the beginning, that were pretty easy to get lost in. Minor suggestion.

I really liked the change in paragraph sizes-how you would switch abruptly from a string of "thick" paragraphs to a string of one-sentance ones. The effect was very cool. And the ending... now that was well-nigh heartstopping.

Can't wait for more!