Why did Ron have to go the Hospital web what did he do with in h iui s frist week? Green spells causes Harry scar to burn if there hit him? Uhm okay if you say so I guess that makes sense. You go Hermione show Draco and Pansy just h ou w incredibly strong you are. I dont thank eather of them could handle the s pi ell the way Hermione did I bet they were staking as soon as there realize Sirus mant that they were next and I believe that they eather cry and or screamed wen they got hit WIMPS. I agree with Ron and Harry Draco should have had 50 point taking away for calling Hermione that foul name. You know I believe he calls her that because well one his an GIT two his stupid and three because he is way past jealous of how good she is at magic better then him by quite a bit. I don't know about you but I believe I'm seeing sparks between Sirus and Hermione.

WELL I guess maybe Snap surviving the war doesn't make me as happy as it did before I knew he was such an jackass. I kind wish Sirus did do something to Snape when he turned up and thank goodness he did both times. I see Pansy Parkinson is as much of an snake (in the right house for it isn't she?) as ever. I bet as the war was going on she hid and only attacked when she had the upper hand and she more then likely attacked from behind or while her target was busy, I could be wrong but I doubt it. I'm not mad at Ron but I do wish that he had told Hermione about him and Flure instead of the way that he did. He got Hermione's hpes up of she and him having something between them and I know his a boy and weather clueless but he did know at least a little that Hermione and feelings for him and that upsets me.

Still rolling with it love the fact that Dumbledore, Snape, Sirus, Remus, and Fred didn't f iui e in the battle of Hogwarts.

Okay sure why not I can roll with this, this is different though but I like different so I'll gave it a shot.

I love the story in general but I can't help, but notice the small mistake you made Draco's in Slytherin not Gryffindor.

I really enjoyed this and the plot line is quite original. I do suggest getting a beta or rereading your stories to check for mistakes such as the taking points from Gryffindor and not Slytherin. Also a little research on your characters to make sure it corresponds with the original books OR if thats how you intended it to be then write a little authors note at the beginning so your readers dont get confused. I loved it x

Sirius has grey eyes, not chocolate. Hermione's eyes are chocolate brown.

Why would you have Remus the Divination teacher? You could have made him the teacher for History of Magic. Move Binns on to the next phase of his death or if he refused to change the classroom and let him drone on to an empty classroom while the students actually got to finally learn other histories besides Goblin Wars.

I know you wrote this years ago but really, Ron and Fleur. First off she is at least two years older than him and secondly, she is not a dumb blonde bimbo that would go for him. She is smart and the first time he pissed her off she would fry him like a chicken. Remember Veela are fire creatures.

This doesn't work, your ages are all wrong, The twins weren't old enough to take part in the tournament yet have finished school. Flur had to of been old enough to take part to be in her last year at school, yet is still in school, because if this it doesn't make and sense.

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It was cute, if a little rushed. I'm willing to let it slide since the story's one of the oldest for this pairing ;)

Cheers!

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You made a little mistake: you removed 10 points from Gryffindor while it was supposed to be from Slytherin :-)