I think the story is a little rushed and it would've been nice to know what happened to Patrick other than thrown into the brig. Did he get counseling? Help?

The first chapter was a bit confusing, but that could have been because it's late, but I loved it! I could visualize the character voicing the words, and Tom was so sweet! Great work. :)

Awesome story! T/B is one of my favorite Star Trek pairings, so I really enjoyed this story.

How adorably sweet! Aww!

ah ha ha! that was so sweet. and i dont

think it was corny at all! you did a great

job on the charictors! *clapes ... alot!*

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Excellent story! I love how you've written Tom and B'elanna's romance, it was done to perfection! *applaudes*

aw, cute

Get it! Get it! Sight for sore eyes! hahaha, okay okay I'll stop. I was rooting for B'Elanna to get her sight back. Also, she didn't sound corny at all *sike ahaha* See, I'm so sensative.

Well I wonder what's gonna happen on the planet. By the way, I just remembered lol I tagged you. Oh yea, good job on the sim so far. It's hard at first but then it makes more sense.

Cool story, good thing B'Elanna can see! You're such a p/t er lol that's *what's another word for cool?* Awsome yea, that's awsome.

Hopefully it will work out well! It would be nice to read something upbeat for once. Can't wait for the next chapter!

great, more please

good job, the story was good, the characters were a lot like they are on the show. i liked it

I really love this story, but you can't leave us like this you got to update soon!

This is really good! I wansn't sure what to expect when I started reading this, but this certainly wasn't it! In a good way though! keep up the good work and update soon

That was good! The story seems to have different dimenions to it and I like that. Can't wait to read more!

Please continue I have to know what happened to B'Elanna! Update soon!