Reviews for Deditionis
Cool chapter 6 . 1/3/2014
Is soras ex honatori bad
37th Street Goddess chapter 6 . 6/14/2010
If my friends ever do that to me, I would skin them alive! But it would surely be fun when I'm one of the spying devils! It's like our party once, a good wholesome party for four became an all-night booze party! I didn't even know where the heck the drinks came from. I am so excited how the much anticipated tutoring would turn out!

Just wondering what happened to the supposed plot of the first two chapters.

And please don't keep us hanging!
37th Street Goddess chapter 3 . 6/14/2010
I love it! Smashing his guitar just like that! I will have to do that to my friend's boyfriend's guitar! Seriously, no! But I would love to pluck a string or two from it. Lucky are Matt's fans, they have free viewing to their practice. So unique that they practice in someone's garage.

I know I'm not a grammar genius but I'll point out what I think are not right anyway.

"retrieving girl's figure"- it should be retreating I guess

"going to get the girl back"- shouldn't it be 'going to get back at her'?

That's all I could point. Good job!
37th Street Goddess chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
Yay! The story's getting good. Sora's eyelashes are black? Isn't it suppose to be red too since she's a redhead? Unless either's a fake... But still this story's on my faves!
Lavender chapter 6 . 2/12/2010
Aw :( you should soo update this, it was getting good :)

You're writing is awsome by the way :)
joana chapter 6 . 5/22/2008
Please update this story soon it sound so the spying on them.
hecate0808 chapter 6 . 3/14/2008
awsome story!
Rewind Soldier chapter 6 . 3/4/2007
YAH! 115 reviews... that kinda says something doesnt it? (it means update... NOW!) lol, I love the story, tis why updateness is required for further breathing...

PLEASE UPDATE! its lovely yehehe ook yea LET ME BREATHE! ... please?
love-is-in-the-air chapter 6 . 8/20/2006
Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please PleasePlease Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please PleasePlease Please Please Please UPDATE.
eternalwhimsy chapter 6 . 8/14/2006
i love the story. update please.
harassed chapter 6 . 7/30/2006
This is very intriguing and funny, what with Sora's mysterious old boyfriend and the whole gang spying on Sora and Yamato. I quite like it, especially the part where Sora smashed Yamato's guitar. XD Keep up the good work, and I hope you update soon. :D
Hajimari chapter 6 . 6/29/2006
Update soon
kttamergirl chapter 3 . 3/31/2006
I'm pretty sure the other one is Takashi, nice story so far, keep writing more, i'm interested.

I'm pretty sure the first 2 band members that you have mentioned in the story r right as well ;)
koishii101 chapter 6 . 3/27/2006
update soon
De Jour chapter 6 . 12/8/2005
This is a good story. I read this before but I was a little surprised that you haven't updated after how many months. That's okay, take your time. But update as you can!
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