Loved it, it's still hilarious

LOL ‘Arg! Avast! BRING ME MY CHUM BUCKET!’

With a baguette.

i LOVE THIS STUFF

That was beautiful. The length was a little much, but I can see that you had to skewer every cliche in this entire, Sue-infested, completely OOC fandom.

Great.

hahah it was a hilarious story! I laughed just about the whole time! lol. _

"Gibbs had also stolen a pair of Anna-Maria’s piratical trousers. Gibbs decided that the way to express his dissatisfaction with the world was to wear girly trousers. Unfortunately for Gibbs, Anna-Maria’s trousers were actually men’s trousers, since women’s trousers hadn’t been invented yet. Gibbs was truly ahead of his time."

Another rip on "emos"? ;)

Well, anyhow, great chapter.

Is that a subtle hint to "emos"? LOL. Good job.

"You married Elizabitch!” demanded Jack.

“Actually, her name is Elizabeth. Your pirate accent is so funny, Jack.” Will giggled happily."

LOL.

That was so twisted and funny!

yay! down with elizabitch!

ah now jack gets to have his wicked, wicked way with will...

~Mystic~

Hey Sarah! Word!

You're probably sitting there thinking "who the hell is this strange person reviewing my fanfiction but using my name and remarking on a phrase i commonly utter? could it be that wonderful person who i havent spoken too much since i left england but miss terribly called Isabel?"

and you would be right. It is Izzy teh kl. And i have FINALLY got around to reviewing your fanfic, because i found an e-mail from you on the school inbox when i was clearing my messages, and got all nostalgic, and so read and reviewed your fanfic. well, i havent spoken too much about the fic yet, but THERE IS STILL TIME.

My review: You know you hilariate me, and the line "Now, I am going to go down to my cabin and rub aloe vera into your husband’s perfect chest, and then I am going to do things to him that you never could!" makes me laugh, as only the thoughts of a petulant sarah-fied jack sparrow could. is this the point at which jack FINALLY gets what he wants, and after embarking on a gay romp will managed to find yet another way to make innocent the whole situation? (and what's wrong with english food?) anyhow, great fic, i

That was hilarious! You should definately write a sequal. :D

wow that was an amazing story! i loved it, i wish it was longer but it is still great. :D I love the ending, simply awesome :D

haha now im not behind you lol anyways, this chapter i liked because it was clever :D i like the way that you use dry humor here, its just really nice, i am also wondering what is up with the description of tina's playing with the shirt and all that? did i miss something? i dunno im just confused i think oh well over all it is very good, like always lol :D

-pau-

This has got to be one of the most hilarious things i've read!

i love it to death!

haha i liked the jokes on this one! i am not talented to think of any at the moment so yeah... but i believe i have no problems with this one at all and i got confused with jack and jack lol oh well i got it anyways haha genious you are!